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Death's Devil
Death, owns an abacus
to taunt the passing days.
Weighs soul worth, metes out pain.
I am but one bead-click away
from darkened earth
or Loves sweet grace.
Rather burn sunshine
'neath starry eyes,
Than own heartache
of "no more time."
Offered up, I show my hand-
a tawny green, my own bead be
crushed tight to whitest sanctity.
A different hue, hand-painted me
in suddle stubborn shades.
Devil brushes me translucent, now
(an automatic "stay")
Corrupt, shall not complete me
(in mind I just exist)
but Devil has vindictive beads
and places me in fist.
My angst and cry go unheard
as Devil moves my line,
Tallyin' sums of every score
adding erred black to mine.
Resistance strong, from beaded plight
I loosen from the bar.
Seek a palm to hide within
'neath lifelines of the heart.
Devil his due, but denied mine-
never to lay another line..
Ended here,
Death's earnest search-
in palms of reason, (ne'r the abacus)
may weigh my worth
in soiled earth.
Published 2nd Jun 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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2nd Jun 2015 4:15am
3rd Jun 2015 6:08am
2nd Jun 2015 4:28am
I call this a slow creeping under my skin, as it fears the things un'had before death's call.. you touch me deeply babe
3rd Jun 2015 6:10am
Aww thanx luv-luv!
You know how much I thrill at
seein' you here? LOTS ;)
ever huggs
~d
You know how much I thrill at
seein' you here? LOTS ;)
ever huggs
~d
2nd Jun 2015 5:28am
Darksigh,
let me start by saying you are such an old soul my darling, you speak of things that are deep
and full of meaning. I am always where you want me to be as the reader.
I indulging in your brilliance,
Write on My Dear..
I enjoy your visions...
love
Zazzles xoxoxox
let me start by saying you are such an old soul my darling, you speak of things that are deep
and full of meaning. I am always where you want me to be as the reader.
I indulging in your brilliance,
Write on My Dear..
I enjoy your visions...
love
Zazzles xoxoxox
3rd Jun 2015 6:16am
Born too late for sure, missed
all the solid stuff m'thinks.
This is the challenged phrase one
I told you hacked up..lol..took
out some good flusters too!
You rock when you read and when you
comment lady-luvz, I am soo grateful!
mwahs
~d
all the solid stuff m'thinks.
This is the challenged phrase one
I told you hacked up..lol..took
out some good flusters too!
You rock when you read and when you
comment lady-luvz, I am soo grateful!
mwahs
~d
2nd Jun 2015 1:20pm
Death, owns an abacus
What an opening line! Drew me right into the tale without a second thought.
What an opening line! Drew me right into the tale without a second thought.
3rd Jun 2015 6:21am
Figure Death is so busy, there's
gotta be minion devils mixed in
there somewhere. ha!
Thanx much & always ;)
~d
gotta be minion devils mixed in
there somewhere. ha!
Thanx much & always ;)
~d
