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Conceptual
I do things
Not because they make sense
But because there's irony in doing them
Often at my own sacrifice
Yet it makes me happy
The contrarian in me
Refusal to go along with a program
That others have created
It becomes conceptual at a certain point
I'm good with that
A pledge to myself
My calling ...
Not because they make sense
But because there's irony in doing them
Often at my own sacrifice
Yet it makes me happy
The contrarian in me
Refusal to go along with a program
That others have created
It becomes conceptual at a certain point
I'm good with that
A pledge to myself
My calling ...
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Re: Conceptual
Anonymous
27th May 2015 1:30am
to thine own self be true.
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Re: Conceptual
27th May 2015 2:01am
Re: Conceptual
27th May 2015 3:06am
Re: Conceptual
27th May 2015 9:22am
Oh I agree, we all have to struggle
to amuse ourselves, of course...
although now and again I am
content to sit back and let somebody
else entertain me...
nicely done...
to amuse ourselves, of course...
although now and again I am
content to sit back and let somebody
else entertain me...
nicely done...
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Re: Conceptual
27th May 2015 10:56am
Re: Conceptual
Anonymous
27th May 2015 3:02pm
off the beaten path... how could one expect you anywhere else
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re: Re: Conceptual
29th May 2015 00:23am
I'm the guy at the corner bar writing in a notebook far removed from the action. People always wondering, who is that guy and what is he writing ?
Re: Conceptual
27th May 2015 3:21pm
such an excellent raw and truthful write - you sound very much like me if this poem is accurate
loved it :-)
loved it :-)
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re: Re: Conceptual
29th May 2015 00:24am
Re: Conceptual
28th May 2015 4:37am
I had to read this and re-read this, Granite, luv. :-* I'll probably read it several more times. I am fond of this concept in a purely theoretical way (I fear I may be far too anal retentive, alas, for much more than that); I find it curious, though, this notion of doing things at your own sacrifice solely to remain at odds with a program created by others.
Individualism is excellent and not allowing others to confine you, I can understand. I just keep having this image in my head of you being contrary in, oh the airport let's say on vacation and your poor wife aggravated because you've chosen That moment to be contrary... :-p I could see myself wanting to hiss in exasperation at you 'twere I in that situation. ;-D
It made me wonder if she'd ever felt that way. :-*
Individualism is excellent and not allowing others to confine you, I can understand. I just keep having this image in my head of you being contrary in, oh the airport let's say on vacation and your poor wife aggravated because you've chosen That moment to be contrary... :-p I could see myself wanting to hiss in exasperation at you 'twere I in that situation. ;-D
It made me wonder if she'd ever felt that way. :-*
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Re: Conceptual
28th May 2015 11:48am
I would say my wife becomes exasperated at me for more domestic issues. Like not closing the door fully of the medicine chest, stuff like that.
My contrarian ways are more about setting a personal tone. They make no sense to others but to me, it is crystal clear. I don't expect others to follow my path, in fact, I wish they would find their own success and leave my space uncrowded. Issues issues ...
My contrarian ways are more about setting a personal tone. They make no sense to others but to me, it is crystal clear. I don't expect others to follow my path, in fact, I wish they would find their own success and leave my space uncrowded. Issues issues ...
re: Re: Conceptual
28th May 2015 5:46pm
Ah, yes, I can see that and understand much better. Thank you for clarifying your meaning for me. This makes a great deal of sense! What a hell of a personal manifesto: bold, uncompromising, strong, visionary... ;-D You. :-*
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Re: Conceptual
29th May 2015 00:26am
It's all crystal clear after awhile
Though sometimes it's right in front of us and the water looks murky ...
Though sometimes it's right in front of us and the water looks murky ...