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~Crash and Burn~
Sun-kissed
shadows
grace perfection
As I shine
into your
hunger-me stare
~silent~
I drape
your lap of steel
to impale
myself
with uncloaked desire
Fierce wanton
I rise
and regress
lapping sweet need
from your porous kiss
Stealing small death
in savory motion
of hip gyrate…
swivel need
draws you deep
~grind extreme~
with pleasure gasps
of me…
Whisper you-
gracing my insides.
Sheer worship
sinks the depths
of your eyes
and I fall
into love
upon you
~*~crash & burn~*~
Published 25th May 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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25th May 2015 6:55pm
25th May 2015 8:13pm
I aim to burn- SO glad you graced my page for singe-play!
be well cute poet ;)
~d
be well cute poet ;)
~d
25th May 2015 6:56pm
Your mastery of metaphor really shines through from beginning to climactic end. As always the imagery is vivid and stimulating. If you keep this up their won't be any left for the rest of us to write with... jj
25th May 2015 8:10pm
Oh *pishaw!!, you...can't pull *that when I read you!
Plenty to share...I don't eat much, I swear! lol/veg
Thanx so much for bringin' your sweet self here!
take care hun ;)
~d
Plenty to share...I don't eat much, I swear! lol/veg
Thanx so much for bringin' your sweet self here!
take care hun ;)
~d
25th May 2015 9:31pm
and I fall
into love
upon you
Is lovely. The descending form ebbing and flowing of words fits the subject matter as well.
into love
upon you
Is lovely. The descending form ebbing and flowing of words fits the subject matter as well.
26th May 2015 8:43am
And..now you must suffer mauling huggs fer that comment! (eeks, I know)
Thank you kindly!
~d
Thank you kindly!
~d
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26th May 2015 00:40am
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26th May 2015 8:48am
The pleasure is mine dearest...
thanks & huggs too!
I do so-love your stoppin' in ;)
take care
~d
thanks & huggs too!
I do so-love your stoppin' in ;)
take care
~d
3rd Jul 2016 4:12pm
Meandering descriptions interlaced with rambunctious verbs, make for a delightful run-thru. Some abstraction @ time though still enjoyable. Keep Grindin CAOS737
