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Lustful thoughts
I wish I could taste your liquid;
submerge my manhood between your legs
coerce your pussy until it begs
conquer your walls;then enter your realm
persuade your soul
filling you; making you whole
submerge my manhood between your legs
coerce your pussy until it begs
conquer your walls;then enter your realm
persuade your soul
filling you; making you whole
Published 24th May 2015
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25th May 2015 11:09am
This is a delightful little fantasy and just graphic enough to be sexy. I enjoyed it. Good job.
26th May 2015 6:37pm
28th Jun 2015 9:08am
Panter896, luv ~ :-*
This is an exquisite work of art. I remember placing it in my list and telling myself I'd come back to comment.
I forgot to do so; please forgive my lapse, luv. :-*
This work is sheer artistry! You perfectly meld the sensuality of the physical with the eroticism of the mental and spiritual in this poem. You take us to another realm entirely here, which, when the connection is there and trust, love and, mayhap, the stars are aligned just so, occurs and is this soul-changing, earth-shattering, blissful thing.
Epiphanic in scope, if you will. Certainly transcendent, resplendent... :-*
You've conveyed it perfectly and in your elegantly cohesive, coherent, cogent way. :-*
Truly, Panter, luv, you are amazing!
This is an exquisite work of art. I remember placing it in my list and telling myself I'd come back to comment.
I forgot to do so; please forgive my lapse, luv. :-*
This work is sheer artistry! You perfectly meld the sensuality of the physical with the eroticism of the mental and spiritual in this poem. You take us to another realm entirely here, which, when the connection is there and trust, love and, mayhap, the stars are aligned just so, occurs and is this soul-changing, earth-shattering, blissful thing.
Epiphanic in scope, if you will. Certainly transcendent, resplendent... :-*
You've conveyed it perfectly and in your elegantly cohesive, coherent, cogent way. :-*
Truly, Panter, luv, you are amazing!
