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~Abstract Love~
I'd love to be your poetry
Your eternal release
Your forever venting sessions
Your endless canvas
Your Masterpiece
Give it to me...
Pour all of your intensity
in vibrant colors-
Spill your soul's
ink onto me
With each expressive stroke
highlighting your wants and desires
With each smear
feel yourself more & more
found in the translation of our chemistry
Give me you...in your entirety
Your eternal release
Your forever venting sessions
Your endless canvas
Your Masterpiece
Give it to me...
Pour all of your intensity
in vibrant colors-
Spill your soul's
ink onto me
With each expressive stroke
highlighting your wants and desires
With each smear
feel yourself more & more
found in the translation of our chemistry
Give me you...in your entirety
Published 23rd May 2015
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23rd May 2015 9:50pm
Anonymous
23rd May 2015 6:50pm
"Your eternal release
Your forever venting sessions
Your endless canvas
Your Masterpiece"
You could easily be
Your forever venting sessions
Your endless canvas
Your Masterpiece"
You could easily be
23rd May 2015 9:53pm
I feel where you're going there.... Inspired to continue to write. Thank you for this!
23rd May 2015 10:27pm
Very grateful for your words 😊
And adding to your list
Thank you much for this compliment!
And adding to your list
Thank you much for this compliment!
24th May 2015 1:06pm
oh how I have longed for a sweet lovely poet to feel and to write a poem of such desire. To crave the verse of an artist, the portrait of a painter, to create a vision of you in ink is a dream I would gladly sleep for eternity to achieve. A beautiful write!!! jj
2nd Jun 2015 2:18pm
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3rd Jun 2015 8:14pm
I don't know what happened to my original comment when I read this, but here's my next attempt hoping it sticks!
N as for this piece, BEAUTIFULLY done n it STUCK me in the heart! :)
N as for this piece, BEAUTIFULLY done n it STUCK me in the heart! :)
1st Apr 2016 4:20am
Anonymous
30th May 2016 9:59pm
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17th Aug 2017 10:52am
i am diggin the entire sensual vibe here...
the title most of all
my kinda lingo..
the title most of all
my kinda lingo..
6th Apr 2018 3:48am
