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Blade Walker
Considering the future tense
UPhones, high speed selections
Drone deliveries to the door
Visits from a hologram whore
But Big Sister watching me
Her slogans nagging on a daily basis
Backed by closed circuit scrutiny
And schemes issued through a private server
All this, and too much more
Only to be absorbed in increments
Dosages calculated and monitored
To heal a deep-fried brain
A slow and ridiculous process
Far too much dystopian nonsense
Now just waiting for Serenity
Should be here directly
Her smile and touch a marvel
All. Night. Long.
UPhones, high speed selections
Drone deliveries to the door
Visits from a hologram whore
But Big Sister watching me
Her slogans nagging on a daily basis
Backed by closed circuit scrutiny
And schemes issued through a private server
All this, and too much more
Only to be absorbed in increments
Dosages calculated and monitored
To heal a deep-fried brain
A slow and ridiculous process
Far too much dystopian nonsense
Now just waiting for Serenity
Should be here directly
Her smile and touch a marvel
All. Night. Long.
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Re: Blade Walker
Anonymous
23rd May 2015 5:15pm
So much food for thought, I am feeling hungry and full at the same time.

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re: Re: Blade Walker
23rd May 2015 5:27pm
Re: Blade Walker
23rd May 2015 5:29pm
Serenity now...Serenity now...
I'd rather be in the space ship version gun sling'n my way through the galaxy ;)
I'd rather be in the space ship version gun sling'n my way through the galaxy ;)
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re: Re: Blade Walker
23rd May 2015 5:38pm
I forgot about that movie. My Serenity's kind of a different story. Maybe I should pick another name.
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23rd May 2015 6:24pm
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Re: Blade Walker
Anonymous
23rd May 2015 5:33pm
crow!
this makes me smile and feel a bit...distant all at the same time. and it makes me want to get outside and forget about technology for a long while.
serenity.
this makes me smile and feel a bit...distant all at the same time. and it makes me want to get outside and forget about technology for a long while.
serenity.

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re: Re: Blade Walker
23rd May 2015 5:39pm
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24th May 2015 1:06am
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24th May 2015 8:48am
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Nothing can take the place of real. But one may have never found each other without virtual reality.
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Re: Blade Walker
26th May 2015 1:54am
Mmmmm Crow.....serenity in her smile and kisses.....nice one.....enjoyed.....xo :)
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26th May 2015 9:16pm
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Anonymous
26th May 2015 2:29pm
i shan't say what the name serenity reminds me of lol but it works great here ...
... instant gratification done you way. digging it.
... instant gratification done you way. digging it.

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26th May 2015 9:18pm
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Re: Blade Walker
4th Jun 2015 4:48am
Something more real than the ultra-real. Something that can't be reproduced. Keep it genuine crowfly!
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