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You and I

You make me feel so loved, so alive
In each moment of my life
You give me your hand
Through the darkness or the day

Our love never fades or goes away
There is nothing that i want to change
All is perfect since we met

When you are very far away
You call many times per day
And leave phone text and emails
Because you are worried for my sake

I placed my heart in your hands
You gave me your soul to protect
Together we match so well

It was love and first sight
And i am happy to say
I love you very much
Endless love
You and I

Written by Gabyyy

(GabiGabriella)

Published 21st May 2015

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Re: You and I

Anonymous

22nd May 2015 1:31am

A startling revelation... This is what she tried to achieve and what I failed to do. I want to be able to write words similar to these you have written because it's my experience. I don't think I'll get that chance with her again. I guess I know now what to do in the future. This one brought tears to my eyes almost as quickly as the moment I realized how much I miss her. Although this isn't for me, thank you for writing it!

Gabyyy (GabiGabriella)

24th May 2015 10:43pm

Thank you,Donovan!I am very glad you liked!And thanks for share about you and your gf,you must conquer her and do all to have her back.Tell her how much you miss her,go to her with a bunch of roses and recite a poem.I'm sure she would like it!My best wishes to you and good luck!