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Overture: Believe & Concerto: Vulnerable
For DevlinDLC's Longest Poem Contest ;-*
Overture: Believe
I
Believed
In
You
Gave
You
My
All
I
Weep
Now
Outwardly
Composed
Internally
Wracked
By
A
Storm
Of
Wretched
Distraught
Bereft
Bereft
Bereft
Bereft
Of
You
Lost without
That illusion
Of your love
Sliding
In
Me
Caressing my molten liquescence
Still
Recalescent
From
Thoughts
Of
Your
Hands exploring my luxurious curves
Splaying
My
Thighs
To
Your
Searching
Gaze
Seeking
Lips
Scoring
Tongue... and teeth (ah, gods, your teeth, and what you do to me with them!)
Lush
I
Am
'round
Thee
Redolent
Of
My
Musk
My
Honey
Weeps
For
Thee
As
Does
My
Soul
Deep
Within
Me
Ahhh!
How
Conflicted
Am
I
I
Know
Not
Whence
To
Turn
Nor
Whither
To
Go
Goddess! Have mercy upon me!
I
Am
In
Supplication
Now
To
Deity
For
You
Have
Shifted
My
Stance
Within
The
World
Nay, nay, 'tis not true, for I, I have shifted it myself
Yet...
Yet...
Yet...
All is not as I thought
Has
All
Then
Been
Untruth?
How, then, can I trust
You
Myself
Alas...
I
Know
Not
What
To
Do
Concerto: Vulnerable
Tentative
Questing
She
re-engages
re-connects
re-commits
re-news
trepidatiously
Begins
The
Path
To
Trust
Anew
Fledgling
P e r a m b u l a t i o n s
Once
Again
So frangible
fluctuant
fallible
friable
F r i g h t e n e d
(courage, now, I whisper)
Soothing self
Letting go
relinquishing
de-programming
100
Years
Of
Thorns
And
Brambles
Arduous
Task
Indeed
...
Battered
And
Bruised
Is
He
Tarnished
No
Snow
White
Steed
In
Sight
A
Tinker's
Mule
Sturdy
Of
Foot
And
Fleet
Of
Heart
Steadfast
In
Loyalty
Carries
This
Brave
And
Resolute
Man
Far, so far
'Cross deserts sere and barren, yet with hints of hidden life
Ascending mountains stark and forbidding, so glorious in their jagged, glacial beauty like sleek, shining knives
Descending again into valleys of lush, verdant foliage then further on into torrid tropical dendritic voluptuousness
Through causeways choked and clogged with verdurous overgrowth
Slogs
Sheer
Determination
Cloaked
In
Persistent
Ever-loving
Mien
And for his labors, what welcome
receives he?
....
At first, her fear nearly bests him
For
What one can fight another's fear?
Ah, this is her battle as much as his and she as much the warrior here as he...
He knew this, though, and came prepared to aid her in this war
Though she knew not and feared 'twas him she needed to engage
Her
Wounds
Are
Deep
So
Very
Deep,
You
See.
She's
Been
Battling
Long ere long, so long, years and years this battle's raged,
from infancy...
Too long
She's
Trapped
Within
And
His
Carelessness
Must
Be
A catalyst for somewhat else
C h a n g e
Freedom
It
Weighs
At
Him
This
Slip
He
Made
But
Being
Mortal
Takes
Its
Toll
As
All
Well
Know
Even
As
She
Does
Patiently and with exceeding care, he helps her begin to unravel coils upon coils of ravening poison
Too quickly and the poison leaps about spraying indiscriminately coating all and sundry
Too slowly and it seeps in everywhere, malevolence desecrating all
'Tis wrapped all 'round her encasing her, shrouding her within
So what they do must be done excruciatingly cautiously lest they lose her and neither is willing for that
He loves her
Has spent his life entire
In search of her
She loves him
The same
They must succeed
So they continue as hour upon hour unfolds upon itself and ceases in significance
At last, they come to the crux buried
Deep
Within her
There seems no part of her untainted by the execrable, abhorrent thing buried within
She cries out in shame abject and terror; she knows she is defiled
And knows, also, that he will now repeat what he did before
For now, he has seen her defilement with his eyes upon her full
She knows the agony she suffers now is naught compared to what is soon to come
And, she cannot brace for this for she has given him her all
She's trusted him
Nowhere
To
Hide
She
Closes
Her
Eyes
And
Prepares
To
Die
Reminding
Herself
To
Cling
To
One
Last
Thing (for she's a Phoenix and she'll arise anew from the flames - reborn, yet gullible once again)
.....
At first, his rage at what has been done to her, what is still being done through arcane means knows no bounds
As
Each
Coil
Unfurls
So
Another
Coal
Drops
Into
The
Furnace
Of
His
Soul
When all is unwrapped, and he sees the foulness embedded within his love, he wants to rend the world
His
Rage
Knows
No
Bounds.
He
Seethes.
Internally,
He
Bleeds.
His
Visage,
Though,
Is
Algid
As
A
Glacier,
Impassive.
It takes great strength for him to remain thus for the heat that chars within seethes and roils demanding exit, yet he staunchly quells and bends his formidable energies to his will
For he sees
He sees his love clearly and he sees what she thinks
He knows what he must do here
He must delay no longer
With
Tender
Gentlest
Hands
Callouses
Notwithstanding
He cradles her in his arms, settles her in his lap, vile putrescence still exuding
He knows this is the way to free her and his love for her consumes him
Makes him immune to that which defiles and debases her
......
She is so enwrapped in misery and pain, she does not at first realize what he has done, is doing
When first he kisses her, she raises bewildered eyes to him, disbelieving the proof of her senses.
But,
The
Kisses,
They
Continue:
Luscious,
Evocative,
Full
Of
Splendor
They
Are
He places his lips upon hers gently, yet firmly, pulling her lips into his mouth and suckling on them by turns. First, the bottom, which he captures betwixt his teeth and lightly nibbles, soothing it with sweet strokes of his tongue. Then, the top, which he teases, tickling softly, tongue again.
He takes long moments to play with her mouth, slowly tantalizing her until he tangos with her tongue; she, now, kissing back as though for her very sustenance, which, after all, they are to one another in that way lovers oft are.
The evil burrowed within her begins to wake, for, these many years, no foe has been successful in attacking it. None have even come close, not even her, for she needs help with this.
And, those who've come before have been repulsed one way or another: by her or it or both and have abandoned her to her fate deeming her unworthy or (she fears) worthless.
He continues with his attentions for now that he has had a taste of her, he must have more
She feels the same for him
They begin to explore each other
A touch here
Caressing there
Skin to skin
At last
He
Finds
Her
Breasts
Magnificent
She
Rubs
Them,
Enthralled,
On
His
Chest
The contrast between them is delicious to them: his skin pale as moonlight save where the sun has burnished him and as his phallus begins to rise, hers richly hued gleaming cocoa save where vivid fuchsia paints her intimately...
As they explore each other lost in love, ancient evil throbs to malevolent life
She screams in sheerest torment. His lips tighten, but he does not pause.
For, he knew this would happen from the beginning, had set his will in place, adamant. To free her, they must persevere, no matter what comes to pass.
She knows, too, they must not stop, but for her torture is certain. He shall suffer anguish as well; this is his love he succors.
He sets his mouth at the source of the malfeasance entwined within her; it also is her most secret treasure and, though bloated by what oozes within, remains exquisite for it is she and though evil has tried, naught can profane her.
As he sets his mouth to her, he blows his breath over her, giving her life (for what is air, but that?)
Ancient malice tries to fight, but recognizes this is a real foe, more real than any fought these many long years: tenacious and relentless. Yet, so is this evil, so more sludge, more detritus, more taint, more defilement.
He focuses on her, the cocoa and fuchsia of her nether lips, the precious ruby adorning the top, and works all with his mouth and tongue and lips and, oh yes, teeth until her screams begin to change in tone and honeyed nectar starts to flow
Utterly
Obliterating
Evil's
Hold
Until
Nearly
All
Signs
Of
Malignance
Are
Gone
Her
Scent
Surrounds
Him
He
Wallows
In
Her
Flavor
He is a man undone, her screams now with catches in her voice are music to his ears
The memory of agony is gone, annihilated by his tongue, his mouth, (dear goddess, his teeth!) his lips
She is remade
Begins
To
Trust
Anew
He knows it is not done
Iniquity waits now for him to be done
To withdraw
Leave her alone
Once more
And that, he will not do
He sets her atop him
She rides
Astride
He
Glides
Inside
And
Out
Again
Glistening
With
Her
Dew
She
Withdraws
Him
Bends
Instead
Traces
His
Straining
Shaft
With
Her
Tongue
Gathering
The
Taste
Of
Two
Moans in bliss and engulfs the head of his organ with her mouth savoring what he's begun to exude mingling with remnants of her fragrant honey
Now
Now
Now
At
Last
The
Remnants
Of
Great
Evil
Bestir
To
Frenzied
Force
Here
Are
Threats
Indeed
Too
Multitude
To
Be
Fought
Should
This
Act
She
Complete
His
Seed
His
Love
Her
Ambrosial
Nectar
Her
Love
In
This
Act
Be
Complete
Replete
Then
This
Heinousness
Is
Doomed
She
Slides
Two
Fingers
Inside
Herself
Instinct
Guiding
Her
Now
She is molten, silken with her honey, fragrant as wildflowers by the sea
Her juices glisten on her rounded thighs so ready for his touch she is
She strokes her fingers across his lips. His nostrils quiver in response; he takes deep breaths, eyes glittering in desire
He aches to taste, but something in her demeanor makes him hesitate
She reaches again and paints his face and again and again 'til all of him is coated with her rendering him impermeable to harm
This she knows as his skin glows
And then he understands
He is at fever pitch now, more ready than he's ever been
She bends, enclasps him with her mouth once more, but he cannot withstand and moans, then gently moves her aside with shaking muscles
He grasps her hand in his and places them both upon his ready crimson shaft
A
Few
More
Strokes
Then
Pearls
Galore
Spew
Forth
She
Catches
A
Few
In
Her
Mouth
The rest spill forth upon her body and
Evil chooses this moment to spew for if this act is completed, it is the end. It spells this ancient malignancy's demise.
Covering her once again so now she appears despoiled and dissolute, ashen, used, evil stakes its final claim.
She
Lies
Quiet
And
So
Silent
As
If
Already
Dead
This breaks his heart and with a great howl, he sets to his loving task, gently slathering her with his devotion from head to toe and kissing her as he does
With each portion of her that he coats and kisses thus tenderly, gleaming life returns to her skin
Evil sloughs to the floor
Desiccated
Dry
Decimated
It does not go easily
There is blood
And there are tears of anguish
Both hers
And his
Yet
Where there is blood
There is life
And
Each
Droplet
That
Falls
Leaves
A
Glorious
Flower
In
Its
Place
With
Outer
Petals
Of
Chocolate
Hue
And
Inner
Ones
Of
Fuchsia
And
Those
Very
Inmost,
For
Those
Few
Who
Bear
Witness,
Containing
Petals
Of
Pearly
Hue
It is said this flower blooms all year round, but can only be harvested on one night or it will fade into nothingness by morning's light
If one is fortunate to harvest it aright, it will bloom one's whole life long and when three of each of the vari-hued petals are gathered together, it will yield a medicine that can heal most ills or, if distilled a special way, will yield a drink to make all merry with no ill after-effects
Best be prepared for love to flow abundantly from such elixir, though...
Many have sought to use it for power or to influence others to their will to no avail
It is a powerful flower
With a mind of its own
Overture: Believe
I
Believed
In
You
Gave
You
My
All
I
Weep
Now
Outwardly
Composed
Internally
Wracked
By
A
Storm
Of
Wretched
Distraught
Bereft
Bereft
Bereft
Bereft
Of
You
Lost without
That illusion
Of your love
Sliding
In
Me
Caressing my molten liquescence
Still
Recalescent
From
Thoughts
Of
Your
Hands exploring my luxurious curves
Splaying
My
Thighs
To
Your
Searching
Gaze
Seeking
Lips
Scoring
Tongue... and teeth (ah, gods, your teeth, and what you do to me with them!)
Lush
I
Am
'round
Thee
Redolent
Of
My
Musk
My
Honey
Weeps
For
Thee
As
Does
My
Soul
Deep
Within
Me
Ahhh!
How
Conflicted
Am
I
I
Know
Not
Whence
To
Turn
Nor
Whither
To
Go
Goddess! Have mercy upon me!
I
Am
In
Supplication
Now
To
Deity
For
You
Have
Shifted
My
Stance
Within
The
World
Nay, nay, 'tis not true, for I, I have shifted it myself
Yet...
Yet...
Yet...
All is not as I thought
Has
All
Then
Been
Untruth?
How, then, can I trust
You
Myself
Alas...
I
Know
Not
What
To
Do
Concerto: Vulnerable
Tentative
Questing
She
re-engages
re-connects
re-commits
re-news
trepidatiously
Begins
The
Path
To
Trust
Anew
Fledgling
P e r a m b u l a t i o n s
Once
Again
So frangible
fluctuant
fallible
friable
F r i g h t e n e d
(courage, now, I whisper)
Soothing self
Letting go
relinquishing
de-programming
100
Years
Of
Thorns
And
Brambles
Arduous
Task
Indeed
...
Battered
And
Bruised
Is
He
Tarnished
No
Snow
White
Steed
In
Sight
A
Tinker's
Mule
Sturdy
Of
Foot
And
Fleet
Of
Heart
Steadfast
In
Loyalty
Carries
This
Brave
And
Resolute
Man
Far, so far
'Cross deserts sere and barren, yet with hints of hidden life
Ascending mountains stark and forbidding, so glorious in their jagged, glacial beauty like sleek, shining knives
Descending again into valleys of lush, verdant foliage then further on into torrid tropical dendritic voluptuousness
Through causeways choked and clogged with verdurous overgrowth
Slogs
Sheer
Determination
Cloaked
In
Persistent
Ever-loving
Mien
And for his labors, what welcome
receives he?
....
At first, her fear nearly bests him
For
What one can fight another's fear?
Ah, this is her battle as much as his and she as much the warrior here as he...
He knew this, though, and came prepared to aid her in this war
Though she knew not and feared 'twas him she needed to engage
Her
Wounds
Are
Deep
So
Very
Deep,
You
See.
She's
Been
Battling
Long ere long, so long, years and years this battle's raged,
from infancy...
Too long
She's
Trapped
Within
And
His
Carelessness
Must
Be
A catalyst for somewhat else
C h a n g e
Freedom
It
Weighs
At
Him
This
Slip
He
Made
But
Being
Mortal
Takes
Its
Toll
As
All
Well
Know
Even
As
She
Does
Patiently and with exceeding care, he helps her begin to unravel coils upon coils of ravening poison
Too quickly and the poison leaps about spraying indiscriminately coating all and sundry
Too slowly and it seeps in everywhere, malevolence desecrating all
'Tis wrapped all 'round her encasing her, shrouding her within
So what they do must be done excruciatingly cautiously lest they lose her and neither is willing for that
He loves her
Has spent his life entire
In search of her
She loves him
The same
They must succeed
So they continue as hour upon hour unfolds upon itself and ceases in significance
At last, they come to the crux buried
Deep
Within her
There seems no part of her untainted by the execrable, abhorrent thing buried within
She cries out in shame abject and terror; she knows she is defiled
And knows, also, that he will now repeat what he did before
For now, he has seen her defilement with his eyes upon her full
She knows the agony she suffers now is naught compared to what is soon to come
And, she cannot brace for this for she has given him her all
She's trusted him
Nowhere
To
Hide
She
Closes
Her
Eyes
And
Prepares
To
Die
Reminding
Herself
To
Cling
To
One
Last
Thing (for she's a Phoenix and she'll arise anew from the flames - reborn, yet gullible once again)
.....
At first, his rage at what has been done to her, what is still being done through arcane means knows no bounds
As
Each
Coil
Unfurls
So
Another
Coal
Drops
Into
The
Furnace
Of
His
Soul
When all is unwrapped, and he sees the foulness embedded within his love, he wants to rend the world
His
Rage
Knows
No
Bounds.
He
Seethes.
Internally,
He
Bleeds.
His
Visage,
Though,
Is
Algid
As
A
Glacier,
Impassive.
It takes great strength for him to remain thus for the heat that chars within seethes and roils demanding exit, yet he staunchly quells and bends his formidable energies to his will
For he sees
He sees his love clearly and he sees what she thinks
He knows what he must do here
He must delay no longer
With
Tender
Gentlest
Hands
Callouses
Notwithstanding
He cradles her in his arms, settles her in his lap, vile putrescence still exuding
He knows this is the way to free her and his love for her consumes him
Makes him immune to that which defiles and debases her
......
She is so enwrapped in misery and pain, she does not at first realize what he has done, is doing
When first he kisses her, she raises bewildered eyes to him, disbelieving the proof of her senses.
But,
The
Kisses,
They
Continue:
Luscious,
Evocative,
Full
Of
Splendor
They
Are
He places his lips upon hers gently, yet firmly, pulling her lips into his mouth and suckling on them by turns. First, the bottom, which he captures betwixt his teeth and lightly nibbles, soothing it with sweet strokes of his tongue. Then, the top, which he teases, tickling softly, tongue again.
He takes long moments to play with her mouth, slowly tantalizing her until he tangos with her tongue; she, now, kissing back as though for her very sustenance, which, after all, they are to one another in that way lovers oft are.
The evil burrowed within her begins to wake, for, these many years, no foe has been successful in attacking it. None have even come close, not even her, for she needs help with this.
And, those who've come before have been repulsed one way or another: by her or it or both and have abandoned her to her fate deeming her unworthy or (she fears) worthless.
He continues with his attentions for now that he has had a taste of her, he must have more
She feels the same for him
They begin to explore each other
A touch here
Caressing there
Skin to skin
At last
He
Finds
Her
Breasts
Magnificent
She
Rubs
Them,
Enthralled,
On
His
Chest
The contrast between them is delicious to them: his skin pale as moonlight save where the sun has burnished him and as his phallus begins to rise, hers richly hued gleaming cocoa save where vivid fuchsia paints her intimately...
As they explore each other lost in love, ancient evil throbs to malevolent life
She screams in sheerest torment. His lips tighten, but he does not pause.
For, he knew this would happen from the beginning, had set his will in place, adamant. To free her, they must persevere, no matter what comes to pass.
She knows, too, they must not stop, but for her torture is certain. He shall suffer anguish as well; this is his love he succors.
He sets his mouth at the source of the malfeasance entwined within her; it also is her most secret treasure and, though bloated by what oozes within, remains exquisite for it is she and though evil has tried, naught can profane her.
As he sets his mouth to her, he blows his breath over her, giving her life (for what is air, but that?)
Ancient malice tries to fight, but recognizes this is a real foe, more real than any fought these many long years: tenacious and relentless. Yet, so is this evil, so more sludge, more detritus, more taint, more defilement.
He focuses on her, the cocoa and fuchsia of her nether lips, the precious ruby adorning the top, and works all with his mouth and tongue and lips and, oh yes, teeth until her screams begin to change in tone and honeyed nectar starts to flow
Utterly
Obliterating
Evil's
Hold
Until
Nearly
All
Signs
Of
Malignance
Are
Gone
Her
Scent
Surrounds
Him
He
Wallows
In
Her
Flavor
He is a man undone, her screams now with catches in her voice are music to his ears
The memory of agony is gone, annihilated by his tongue, his mouth, (dear goddess, his teeth!) his lips
She is remade
Begins
To
Trust
Anew
He knows it is not done
Iniquity waits now for him to be done
To withdraw
Leave her alone
Once more
And that, he will not do
He sets her atop him
She rides
Astride
He
Glides
Inside
And
Out
Again
Glistening
With
Her
Dew
She
Withdraws
Him
Bends
Instead
Traces
His
Straining
Shaft
With
Her
Tongue
Gathering
The
Taste
Of
Two
Moans in bliss and engulfs the head of his organ with her mouth savoring what he's begun to exude mingling with remnants of her fragrant honey
Now
Now
Now
At
Last
The
Remnants
Of
Great
Evil
Bestir
To
Frenzied
Force
Here
Are
Threats
Indeed
Too
Multitude
To
Be
Fought
Should
This
Act
She
Complete
His
Seed
His
Love
Her
Ambrosial
Nectar
Her
Love
In
This
Act
Be
Complete
Replete
Then
This
Heinousness
Is
Doomed
She
Slides
Two
Fingers
Inside
Herself
Instinct
Guiding
Her
Now
She is molten, silken with her honey, fragrant as wildflowers by the sea
Her juices glisten on her rounded thighs so ready for his touch she is
She strokes her fingers across his lips. His nostrils quiver in response; he takes deep breaths, eyes glittering in desire
He aches to taste, but something in her demeanor makes him hesitate
She reaches again and paints his face and again and again 'til all of him is coated with her rendering him impermeable to harm
This she knows as his skin glows
And then he understands
He is at fever pitch now, more ready than he's ever been
She bends, enclasps him with her mouth once more, but he cannot withstand and moans, then gently moves her aside with shaking muscles
He grasps her hand in his and places them both upon his ready crimson shaft
A
Few
More
Strokes
Then
Pearls
Galore
Spew
Forth
She
Catches
A
Few
In
Her
Mouth
The rest spill forth upon her body and
Evil chooses this moment to spew for if this act is completed, it is the end. It spells this ancient malignancy's demise.
Covering her once again so now she appears despoiled and dissolute, ashen, used, evil stakes its final claim.
She
Lies
Quiet
And
So
Silent
As
If
Already
Dead
This breaks his heart and with a great howl, he sets to his loving task, gently slathering her with his devotion from head to toe and kissing her as he does
With each portion of her that he coats and kisses thus tenderly, gleaming life returns to her skin
Evil sloughs to the floor
Desiccated
Dry
Decimated
It does not go easily
There is blood
And there are tears of anguish
Both hers
And his
Yet
Where there is blood
There is life
And
Each
Droplet
That
Falls
Leaves
A
Glorious
Flower
In
Its
Place
With
Outer
Petals
Of
Chocolate
Hue
And
Inner
Ones
Of
Fuchsia
And
Those
Very
Inmost,
For
Those
Few
Who
Bear
Witness,
Containing
Petals
Of
Pearly
Hue
It is said this flower blooms all year round, but can only be harvested on one night or it will fade into nothingness by morning's light
If one is fortunate to harvest it aright, it will bloom one's whole life long and when three of each of the vari-hued petals are gathered together, it will yield a medicine that can heal most ills or, if distilled a special way, will yield a drink to make all merry with no ill after-effects
Best be prepared for love to flow abundantly from such elixir, though...
Many have sought to use it for power or to influence others to their will to no avail
It is a powerful flower
With a mind of its own
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