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wanted
i cry and i rip
on the inside
your pain...i want,
your hurt
give it to me
i see you tremble
i see you fear
so lost,so desperate
your eyes
fill with tears
your words
like a pendulum
slice deep
you cry
you try so hard
just to be...
on the inside
your pain...i want,
your hurt
give it to me
i see you tremble
i see you fear
so lost,so desperate
your eyes
fill with tears
your words
like a pendulum
slice deep
you cry
you try so hard
just to be...
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20th May 2015 00:31am
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20th May 2015 10:46pm
much love...some years back my young son growing up,broke my heart,he just wanted to be wanted (as life goes,pages turn and all is good so far :) (thanks)
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20th May 2015 8:19pm
Sometimes, simply being close enough to care...is really all that is required.
Poignant and precise...penned with such compassion,My Friend! This truly touches the soul.
Poignant and precise...penned with such compassion,My Friend! This truly touches the soul.
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20th May 2015 10:55pm
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21st May 2015 6:38am
Awwww. :( I completely understand this feeling of complete and utter helplessness, desperation to take the pain away, longing to heal and make life easier for the person in anguish. Oh, how it hurts so bad! Though simply being there with a caring ear and heart goes a long way, sometimes it doesn't feel like enough, and accepting that it is can be difficult sometimes. But it's all you can do. Heartbreaking write. I relate.
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Anonymous
23rd May 2015 3:15am
Great write Hash......I see my soul within this.....feeling this.....RL for me.....xo :)
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2015 8:54am
you have a lovely soul, hash :) this write is perfect
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