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Haunted Soul Within Me
I can feel sadness within your spirit
see a fake smile painted on sweet lips
while your haunted soul tries to compose
past won't let you forget many yesterday's
keep trying to be positive letting negative go
so many people around you hurting
seek to help all those around you
you feel each tear as if your own
while forgetting that you need luv as well
bury all your feelings laced with pain
loneliness not even you can explain
plundered down many trails in life
crossed paths with many beautiful souls
some of whom now ignore your friendship
have walked away with no thought
your existence has become invisible
yet you're still sending luv
not understanding any reason to be done
each smile hides a dying soul within
it's time to look after yourself
let go of the cruel past and be happy
leave it where it belongs....GONE
those who luv you are in your heart
don't miss feeling their kisses and hugs
be true to who you are
you can't control another's heart
treat others how you know it should be
how they give back to you
is on their own conscience
(Inspired by a spiritual stranger)
Copyright © 2015 flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
see a fake smile painted on sweet lips
while your haunted soul tries to compose
past won't let you forget many yesterday's
keep trying to be positive letting negative go
so many people around you hurting
seek to help all those around you
you feel each tear as if your own
while forgetting that you need luv as well
bury all your feelings laced with pain
loneliness not even you can explain
plundered down many trails in life
crossed paths with many beautiful souls
some of whom now ignore your friendship
have walked away with no thought
your existence has become invisible
yet you're still sending luv
not understanding any reason to be done
each smile hides a dying soul within
it's time to look after yourself
let go of the cruel past and be happy
leave it where it belongs....GONE
those who luv you are in your heart
don't miss feeling their kisses and hugs
be true to who you are
you can't control another's heart
treat others how you know it should be
how they give back to you
is on their own conscience
(Inspired by a spiritual stranger)
Copyright © 2015 flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
16th May 2015 2:22pm
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19th May 2015 00:19am
Awe thank you Glen......you always make me smile......thank you for your friendship thru the years......xo :)
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re: Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
19th May 2015 00:21am
Sweet S......so appreciate your thoughts here......there are times when we need to sit back make we are ok.....cause we get to the point where we ignore our own pain.....our smiles become nonexistent......thank you my friend.....luv...hugs and smiles your way xo :)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
16th May 2015 4:13pm
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19th May 2015 00:22am
Hi SO......I'm honored that you have stopped my way with such kind words......thank you xo :)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
16th May 2015 6:26pm
Flower, you have so much empathy and kindness towards others that maybe you do forget to take care of yourself. It's a tough balance, altruism and self-preservation. I'd say your lovely soul comes first, staying strong to help those you try to protect, finding enjoyment in the process. Great job sweet Flower!
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re: Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
19th May 2015 00:26am
Wise Crow.......so thankful for you sharing your thoughts with me.......you've always kind to me and supportive.....glad our souls have crossed in life.....you're a blessing.....xo ::)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
Anonymous
16th May 2015 11:07pm
Miss Flower, one word: Amazing!
xoxo, Devlin;)
xoxo, Devlin;)

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Awe Dev....two words back.....LUV YA!!!!! Ok ok...a few more.....thank you.....honored by the RL add on.....MAWH!! xoxo :)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
17th May 2015 00:29am
A Haunted Soul but within a body full of kindness and empathy; a vessel of light from you to them.
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re: Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
19th May 2015 00:32am
Oh Lord Viddax......I'm very honored to see your kindness and smile upon my page......thank you for such beautiful touching words......humbled by the RL add on.....luv......hugs and appreciation your way......xo :)
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re: Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
19th May 2015 00:45am
Lily my sacred friend......as I heard her speak tears came to my eyes.......when I wrote this still hearing her words many thoughts of you came to me......I feel these words so much towards you when I read this.....was shocked when I heard her confirm all that I felt so deep inside.....feelings I know you knew about me and feel about yourself deep within.....luv ya my friend....always beside you....xo :)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
18th May 2015 4:02am
Wow, rip my heart out! This is exactly how I feel sometimes! Beautifully written, great ink!
~Stormi~
~Stormi~
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19th May 2015 00:51am
Oh Stormi......I'm sorry that you do......you seem like such a sweet soul.....ever need a friend.....pm me anytime......thank you for such a heartfelt comment....."take care of you"......sounds selfish I know but I need to learn to luv people no further than giving a piece of my soul.....luv and hugs xo :)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
18th May 2015 9:11am
This is a really great poem, great choice of words,I really like how it starts kinda dark but love will always find a way back in your heart, bravo my friend
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19th May 2015 1:39am
Oh wow what an awesome surprise for me to see your smile upon my page......was just thinking or you the other day.....I'm happy the mix worked well together......so happy you've shared your thoughts with me......honored by the "Bravo".....thank you my friend.....luv and smiles your way xo :)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
18th May 2015 1:01pm
re: Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
19th May 2015 1:41am
Thank you "gotischer".....appreciate you much for stopping by my way......glad you enjoyed......xo :)
Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
20th May 2015 5:53am
Be true. Be you.
My friend, you know no other way.
You know what I'm sendin' your way, ES.
xo
EV
My friend, you know no other way.
You know what I'm sendin' your way, ES.
xo
EV
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re: Re: Haunted Soul Within Me
23rd May 2015 2:37am
Sweet EV......will always be me.....you've corrupted my mind with many things.....that was one of many that I will always follow....thank you....sending corruptiveness back your way.....luv.....hugs and evil thoughts.....xo :)
Re. Haunted Soul Within Me
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 4:00am
This is one of the best ones of yours I have read.

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Re: Re. Haunted Soul Within Me
4th Aug 2015 5:14am
Hi Scooter...this is a very personal write for me......it is a look inside myself thru a spiritual reader......first time I ever went to one.....this is what she said.....thank you for the highly honorable comment.....xo :)