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Down to Two
If I were to kiss your mouth
and be borne again
'neath your flame,
Would you hold me up..
caress my name..
against Time's awful stand?
If you were to pull away,
I'd be denied air..
Like cells on boil
after acid rain
has rolled through soul town.
Would it be enough
to convince
of my solid-rock stare?
Of those spaces inside,
a forever lonely body-cry..
without you there?
and there, and there.
Might I see you melt
your wings for me?
No need to fly so far,
you see?
I only bleed, when I need
and I do...
All thoughts
come down
to two.
and be borne again
'neath your flame,
Would you hold me up..
caress my name..
against Time's awful stand?
If you were to pull away,
I'd be denied air..
Like cells on boil
after acid rain
has rolled through soul town.
Would it be enough
to convince
of my solid-rock stare?
Of those spaces inside,
a forever lonely body-cry..
without you there?
and there, and there.
Might I see you melt
your wings for me?
No need to fly so far,
you see?
I only bleed, when I need
and I do...
All thoughts
come down
to two.
Published 15th May 2015
| Edited 21st Jul 2015
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15th May 2015 7:17pm
18th May 2015 5:34am
I got crazy with questions too..lol...
head-spin men do it every time.
ty so much!!
~d
head-spin men do it every time.
ty so much!!
~d
16th May 2015 2:54am
18th May 2015 5:36am
12th Jun 2015 12:06pm
Hello my friend; Ah, the breath of life, given freely from your love, burning wings and blood shared... Oh, for our love to be every where, within and without... Bein married the last 18 years, together o'er 20, can barely remember a time without... Very few have been the days without, whether up or down... Very well done, will catch ya on the flips side darlin: wolf
12th Jun 2015 3:23pm
You gottsa know I enjoy ur read'n!
..one of my favs is the rarity in accepting the love with the rest..ups, downs, blood, tears.
'Balance' being *key to long-lived bliss m'thinks.
Hard work, sum bits, you get props bigg-time Wolf
fer long-haulin' ;)
luvz en grin
~d
..one of my favs is the rarity in accepting the love with the rest..ups, downs, blood, tears.
'Balance' being *key to long-lived bliss m'thinks.
Hard work, sum bits, you get props bigg-time Wolf
fer long-haulin' ;)
luvz en grin
~d
