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Woman-flesh, Igniting
Before him..
I spent my smiles
between palest thighs
of satin sundown..
I went shallow
for soft kisses,
dark hair long in my fists.
Grateful for the night
and this woman..
She was my graceful arch
of slender hips,
beckoning tender with moistened lips..
I died to be there
molded skin to skin
in soft seduction 'midst barren sin..
Intelligent beauty
hung tranquil from her gaze..
her smooth body wrap,
promised pleasure in foretaste…
In weakened appreciation,
I bowed to shower love
from tip to hip..
Rose above perfect creation
and pressed my moist need
upon her
again and again…
Slipping through the rhythm
We paused~
eye to eye
just to justify
the palm-held passion
of woman-flesh
igniting…
Published 16th May 2015
| Edited 21st Jul 2015
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17th May 2015 00:43am
I like how you structured your poem and the atmosphere that is expressed in your poem!
18th May 2015 7:43am
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18th May 2015 7:47am
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18th May 2015 7:49am
Anonymous
21st May 2015 9:55pm
darksighs,
For sure, we have ignition!
Loved your line:
"Rose above perfect creation-
and pressed my moist need
upon her"
Enjoyed!
tornado
For sure, we have ignition!
Loved your line:
"Rose above perfect creation-
and pressed my moist need
upon her"
Enjoyed!
tornado
Anonymous
27th May 2015 3:35am
You hit the mark with this one, very much enjoyed the,flow!
