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Never Let Go
In the beginning
you put your heart in mine,
I put my trust in you.
Here and now,we join our joys together
share our dreams and wonders,
our future smiles and tears to come,
our happiness and our pain...
we share our love,completely.
Into each others eyes we travel
I through you,as you through me
our hearts fuse together
our essence,our vapors,our winds
so let the bells ring
as we walk not run
into this journey
with tender hearts and humble minds,
knowing,to the end,
my hand will always be in yours.
*wrote this for my niece and her fiance,any thoughts or suggestions greatly appreciated (thanks)...June wedding :)
you put your heart in mine,
I put my trust in you.
Here and now,we join our joys together
share our dreams and wonders,
our future smiles and tears to come,
our happiness and our pain...
we share our love,completely.
Into each others eyes we travel
I through you,as you through me
our hearts fuse together
our essence,our vapors,our winds
so let the bells ring
as we walk not run
into this journey
with tender hearts and humble minds,
knowing,to the end,
my hand will always be in yours.
*wrote this for my niece and her fiance,any thoughts or suggestions greatly appreciated (thanks)...June wedding :)
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Re: Never Let Go
Anonymous
14th May 2015 10:06pm
simply beautiful, Mister Hash
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Anonymous
14th May 2015 10:08pm
No. Nothing to add here, Hashman. A stunning piece is all that I have to offer. . .Enjoyed. . .Devlin.
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15th May 2015 00:46am
Re: Never Let Go
14th May 2015 10:49pm
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15th May 2015 00:51am
"i love the smell of napalm in the morning" ...thank you Virginiapetal :) (peace)
Re: Never Let Go
14th May 2015 10:58pm
Captivated from the opening to the last full stop!
It is beautiful and echoes an adventure that can only be felt two hearts beating as one!
They will love it!A June wedding?Wow!Congrats to them!
Kisses dear!
It is beautiful and echoes an adventure that can only be felt two hearts beating as one!
They will love it!A June wedding?Wow!Congrats to them!
Kisses dear!
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re: Re: Never Let Go
15th May 2015 00:55am
your words and joy make my heart beat...thump,thump,thump (thank you Lady P :)
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15th May 2015 00:55am
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15th May 2015 6:41am
Re: Never Let Go
Anonymous
16th May 2015 1:41am
Awe Hash.....what a beautiful tribute to your Niece and Fiance......enjoyed this very much.....xo :)
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17th May 2015 6:39pm
Re: Never Let Go
16th May 2015 3:36am
O...mo Chara...this is truly written straight from your heart! This is not simply beautiful, it is breath-catching...beautiful!!!!
When 2 souls are joined...2 hearts beating as one--pure magic here!
Your niece, and her fiance will be surely honored by this piece!
My very best to the both of them! May they know love ever-lasting.
When 2 souls are joined...2 hearts beating as one--pure magic here!
Your niece, and her fiance will be surely honored by this piece!
My very best to the both of them! May they know love ever-lasting.
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17th May 2015 6:40pm
Re: Never Let Go
17th May 2015 2:39pm
That's a beautiful thing to give them for their wedding, Hash. So sweet and deep and always to remember. Wonderful!
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22nd May 2015 8:57pm