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what do we do now...
let's be frank -
you don't find me
half so attractive this
morning...
I feel the same -
I don't find me
half so attractive this
morning
either...
so what about
a drink..?
Published 3rd May 2015
| Edited 4th May 2015
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4th May 2015 00:40am
Irish coffee might do the trick! You describe an awkward but funny situation.
4th May 2015 00:42am
if "awkward but funny" wasn't three words
I'd go for it as my middle name..:)
4th May 2015 1:57am
I think it's pretty deep, which is a good thing for the size of the poem, it's boxing way above it's weight and winning
good stuff, good fellow
good stuff, good fellow
4th May 2015 11:36am
thanks...
you see, I've never believed
that the length of the pencil
affects the point..:)
you see, I've never believed
that the length of the pencil
affects the point..:)
4th May 2015 2:06am
just a case of clouded eyes. a drink wld make things clearer or foggier. either way is perfect...
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