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Your Rehab Appointment
He told the doctor;
I need her in my life
One way or another
To get better
And I sit beside him
Trying to grasp
Exactly what that means.
So he can get better
While I rust.
His new heroin
Heroine
That will eventually rest
On his mantle;
A priceless but dusty
Piece of memorabilia.
I need her in my life
One way or another
To get better
And I sit beside him
Trying to grasp
Exactly what that means.
So he can get better
While I rust.
His new heroin
Heroine
That will eventually rest
On his mantle;
A priceless but dusty
Piece of memorabilia.
Published 1st May 2015
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2nd May 2015 00:12am
Powerful! It sounds like he's using you as a crutch, Virginia. Back breaking work. It must take quite an effort to remain silent during these consultations with the doctor, who probably just sits there nodding his head in agreement, not understanding the difficulty. And then you get home to continue the rusting process. The heroin - heroine wordplay is right on. Then at the end a trophy girlfriend trying to maintain her balance on the mantle. Priceless indeed. Too bad your man doesn't seem to realize it.
2nd May 2015 00:23am
2nd May 2015 3:15am
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2nd May 2015 7:04am
"So he can get better
While I rust.
His new heroin
Heroine"
You captured the theme so concisely and profoundly. He needs you as his personal super heroine simply in exchange for everything else in your life. He turns you into just another dependency.
Strong imagery and a powerful write. Be strong. Taryn is right; you are worth so much, there is so much inside you that deserves to be free.
While I rust.
His new heroin
Heroine"
You captured the theme so concisely and profoundly. He needs you as his personal super heroine simply in exchange for everything else in your life. He turns you into just another dependency.
Strong imagery and a powerful write. Be strong. Taryn is right; you are worth so much, there is so much inside you that deserves to be free.
Anonymous
3rd May 2015 8:37pm
Love this for the write, hate this for the truth it tells.
1958 ... Was a five year old... Had to endure the summer Pocanos with aunt Iris....Henny Youngman emerged after the bisque... "The hardest working man in showbiz". Virginiapetal...you are the hardest working woman in Lovebiz! Proceed with care!
1958 ... Was a five year old... Had to endure the summer Pocanos with aunt Iris....Henny Youngman emerged after the bisque... "The hardest working man in showbiz". Virginiapetal...you are the hardest working woman in Lovebiz! Proceed with care!
3rd May 2015 10:54pm
No sympathy for the drug addicts
Its a world of hurt and darkness.
Don't rust anymore
Its a world of hurt and darkness.
Don't rust anymore
5th May 2015 1:20am
