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falling
he was
maybe just a dream
she promised
herself she wouldn't
but it happens
she started falling
he went away
and somehow
she will never
be the same
maybe just a dream
she promised
herself she wouldn't
but it happens
she started falling
he went away
and somehow
she will never
be the same
Published 25th Apr 2015
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25th Apr 2015 7:39pm
very relatable. No matter how crushed the heart has become, one thing the mind can never promise is how the heart will always feel, even knowing it will only to be broken again, maybe... and maybe not... jj
16th May 2015 8:36pm
26th Apr 2015 00:14am
your poem says enough to tell a complete story, a very sad one. tenderly written...
16th May 2015 8:36pm
Thank You as always JohnFeddeler for the read and thoughtful comments … always appreciated.. :)
26th Apr 2015 10:03am
There is more truth contained in these few lines than in books, songs, and sermons everywhere. You hit the nail right on the head. Excellent!
16th May 2015 8:37pm
Thank You FindingZoe for the read and your thoughtful comments…much appreciated ! :)
