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The Opposite Hex
I tend to ramble, but I'll be terse
Only one way to reverse this curse
I'm sure that she'll do what she can
To reform this Crow into a man
She must put on her finest leather
Then come to me in stormy weather
She'll ignore the walking dead
And fly directly to my bed
Not wasting one word on loose talk
Just take this fowl one by the cock
She will then insert me well
Into her warmth to break the spell
She'll ride me fiercely 'til the dawn
So when we come the curse is gone
A climax for a madman's whim
But it beats depending on the Brothers Grimm.
Only one way to reverse this curse
I'm sure that she'll do what she can
To reform this Crow into a man
She must put on her finest leather
Then come to me in stormy weather
She'll ignore the walking dead
And fly directly to my bed
Not wasting one word on loose talk
Just take this fowl one by the cock
She will then insert me well
Into her warmth to break the spell
She'll ride me fiercely 'til the dawn
So when we come the curse is gone
A climax for a madman's whim
But it beats depending on the Brothers Grimm.
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Re: The Opposite Hex
25th Apr 2015 4:22pm
:) Crowfly. I like your words, you sounded like you galloped there. Good read!
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2015 5:29pm
The title? AWESOME. I will give you $500 for it right now.
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re: Re: The Opposite Hex
25th Apr 2015 5:44pm
With you I'd make an exception. Your words are too much of a turn on to ignore. Thanks sweet babe!
Re: The Opposite Hex
25th Apr 2015 6:21pm
giggles
i just love this crowfly!! whimsical with a fantastic pace, such a treat to read
i just love this crowfly!! whimsical with a fantastic pace, such a treat to read
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25th Apr 2015 7:09pm
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25th Apr 2015 7:50pm
I enjoyed this Mr.C, epic-like.
Did you mean to write
'comes to me in stormy leather' or weather?
:)
Did you mean to write
'comes to me in stormy leather' or weather?
:)
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26th Apr 2015 00:31am
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26th Apr 2015 5:50pm
Thanks Lady. I can't resist rhyming and some rhythm. It's fun! Almost like doing a puzzle.
Re: The Opposite Hex
29th Apr 2015 4:57am
Superspiritual tryst! Aw that's a timeless desire! Past the undead, past everything and straight to your secret room. That's what turns the beast back into a man. That's quite a private chamber to share. Awesome write to expose crowfly!
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