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My Apex
Whenever you fall down
or be frown
with your mates
and ignore their gates
never stop living
believe in giving
happiness and joy
to one who cry
and never be proud
as it spoils one's beauty
i am beautiful
not by my looks
but for my deeds
and i know one day
i will catch the apex
and then succes runs
before me., not me then
and be with what
that never apart
the life long promise
i have made
to this nature that
i will share happiness
by any means and teens
and never let me down
do you agree!
or be frown
with your mates
and ignore their gates
never stop living
believe in giving
happiness and joy
to one who cry
and never be proud
as it spoils one's beauty
i am beautiful
not by my looks
but for my deeds
and i know one day
i will catch the apex
and then succes runs
before me., not me then
and be with what
that never apart
the life long promise
i have made
to this nature that
i will share happiness
by any means and teens
and never let me down
do you agree!
Published 24th Apr 2015
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2015 3:33pm
Great write, Survi.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
3rd May 2015 3:42am
I love the lines "never be proud / as it spoils one's beauty." True beauty comes from within. Fine work Survi!
31st May 2015 9:49am
I agree wholeheartedly!
If one truly love, he will be willing to
lay down his life for the person he
loves. He looks to find the way to make
his love a better person even some
time it hurts. A sacrificial an unselfish
love, true love. I wish you the best.
your poem is much more touching, not
full of negative feelings any more, and
I am glad. Dwell on the good; dwell on
the bad only if it brings out the good
which is sympathy or compassion.
Peace and keep up the good work.
mcjay
If one truly love, he will be willing to
lay down his life for the person he
loves. He looks to find the way to make
his love a better person even some
time it hurts. A sacrificial an unselfish
love, true love. I wish you the best.
your poem is much more touching, not
full of negative feelings any more, and
I am glad. Dwell on the good; dwell on
the bad only if it brings out the good
which is sympathy or compassion.
Peace and keep up the good work.
mcjay
