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Release You, Me
Make a space
For your body
In this room
I'll confess
Dreams of blushing kind
Desires shredding
Common sense.
Pin me against it.
Do not be gentle
Tear them off
Hungrily, mute my moans
with a searching tongue.
Drink me,
Fuck me,
With fingers
Plunging, deep
Pumping hard
Feel me quake
And shake and shake
And shudder, gush.
Release me
To my knees,
Alter worshiping
Breathing hard, heart
Still thumping,
Swallowing whole
Massaging my throat
Handful of hair
Gaze forced up.
You must see me,
Slurp and suck
Take it all, in.
Choking on your
Release.
For your body
In this room
I'll confess
Dreams of blushing kind
Desires shredding
Common sense.
Pin me against it.
Do not be gentle
Tear them off
Hungrily, mute my moans
with a searching tongue.
Drink me,
Fuck me,
With fingers
Plunging, deep
Pumping hard
Feel me quake
And shake and shake
And shudder, gush.
Release me
To my knees,
Alter worshiping
Breathing hard, heart
Still thumping,
Swallowing whole
Massaging my throat
Handful of hair
Gaze forced up.
You must see me,
Slurp and suck
Take it all, in.
Choking on your
Release.
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Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 6:29pm
You make it so easy to visualize, Lookie. I gaze down and am enthralled. Maybe I can return the favor. Meanwhile, I release me, you.
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re: Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 11:41pm
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22nd Apr 2015 6:33pm
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re: Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 11:42pm
Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 6:34pm
And just like that...wow. No more words, no more blood in my brain. My eyes are glazing over and my thoughts are swept into distraction.
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re: Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 11:43pm
Re: Release You, Me
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2015 7:49pm
"Desires shredding
Common sense. "
This happens way to often for me.
You have quite a talent at making me feel your stuff. And its a good feeling!
Common sense. "
This happens way to often for me.
You have quite a talent at making me feel your stuff. And its a good feeling!
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re: Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 11:43pm
Re: Release You, Me
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2015 8:24pm
Well.
That is quite the spell you weave!
That is quite the spell you weave!
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re: Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 11:44pm
Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 11:30pm
re: Re: Release You, Me
22nd Apr 2015 11:46pm
Re: Release You, Me
23rd Apr 2015 1:15pm
Some potent passion and high octane lust in this piece looloo. I made the mistake of first reading this at work... lucky I chose to wear baggier fitting work pants. ;)
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re: Re: Release You, Me
23rd Apr 2015 3:14pm
Re: Release You, Me
24th Apr 2015 3:32am
sex & common sense often duel each other; common sense gets shot down every time. this is totally pumped...
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re: Re: Release You, Me
24th Apr 2015 3:24pm
Re. Release You, Me
30th Aug 2015 3:50am
Fine ink LLL, an obvious wholehearted like. Now that is what I call painting with words!
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30th Aug 2015 3:51pm