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All Is Peaceful
Keep your eyes closed my luv
hold my heart tenderly
let our spirits soar to the unknown
feel our souls interconnect as never before
leave life as it exists to create our own
feel my being walk thru your soul softly
feeling the slightest movement of my heart
sending kisses floating thru your every vein
relax my luv as I take you tonight
to our own private paradise
only our spirits know the way
passion gliding over your skin thru my fingertips
lightly touching you like soft feathers
let me take your mind back
to a beautiful day we once shared
listen to my heart speak to yours
walking side by side ever so slowly
enjoying only sounds of creation
taking in all its beauty surrounding us
ripples in the water silently moving
rushing waterfall of crystal clear green
ever so breathtaking hums a tune so beautifully
two Swans gracefully glide to each other
their necks form a heart of luv
as if they feel the passion of our own
see your lips move to form a smile
as my tongue draws a heart upon your chest
I kiss the back of your hand luvingly
laying here next you with our bodies touching
I watch you silently and contently
entering silently into your peaceful thoughts
my fingers still surveying your flesh
lay my head gently upon your chest
as our spirits meet in our dream world
can feel the heated sun off your skin
birds are singing to their mates
feeding their hungry chirping babies
feeling you so deeply just laying here in your arms
our world is beautiful and calm
peacefulness unknown to others
and to me until the day our souls joined
all is peaceful when our souls make luv
hold my heart tenderly
let our spirits soar to the unknown
feel our souls interconnect as never before
leave life as it exists to create our own
feel my being walk thru your soul softly
feeling the slightest movement of my heart
sending kisses floating thru your every vein
relax my luv as I take you tonight
to our own private paradise
only our spirits know the way
passion gliding over your skin thru my fingertips
lightly touching you like soft feathers
let me take your mind back
to a beautiful day we once shared
listen to my heart speak to yours
walking side by side ever so slowly
enjoying only sounds of creation
taking in all its beauty surrounding us
ripples in the water silently moving
rushing waterfall of crystal clear green
ever so breathtaking hums a tune so beautifully
two Swans gracefully glide to each other
their necks form a heart of luv
as if they feel the passion of our own
see your lips move to form a smile
as my tongue draws a heart upon your chest
I kiss the back of your hand luvingly
laying here next you with our bodies touching
I watch you silently and contently
entering silently into your peaceful thoughts
my fingers still surveying your flesh
lay my head gently upon your chest
as our spirits meet in our dream world
can feel the heated sun off your skin
birds are singing to their mates
feeding their hungry chirping babies
feeling you so deeply just laying here in your arms
our world is beautiful and calm
peacefulness unknown to others
and to me until the day our souls joined
all is peaceful when our souls make luv
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Re: All Is Peaceful
22nd Apr 2015 4:40am
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Awe Sexy EV......no one makes me blush like you .....thank you for the wonderful words.....I'm truly honored.....sending luv and hugs xo :)
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re: Re: All Is Peaceful
23rd Apr 2015 3:27am
Sweet Lily my sacred friend......thank you for your luving words.....always touches my heart to hear from you.....luv ya much xoxo :)
Re: All Is Peaceful
22nd Apr 2015 4:18pm
"Leave life as it exists to create our own." I think that's the key line, and it's a beauty. These are all fine and tender lines, Flower. Peace be with you.
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23rd Apr 2015 3:46am
Sweet Crow....I'm glad you liked that lines most......lots of peace and calmness in my soul these days.....thank you for sharing a smile upon my heart....peace be with you.....xo :)
Re: All Is Peaceful
22nd Apr 2015 11:18pm
you are the Queen of love poems hands down!
really great write my love...
Always
Zazzles xoxoxox
really great write my love...
Always
Zazzles xoxoxox
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re: Re: All Is Peaceful
23rd Apr 2015 3:57am
Awe Sweet Z.....you're so awesome......you've made my heart jump......I'm so glad you enjoyed this one......honored by the RL add on......sending hugs and smiles your way xo :)
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24th Apr 2015 1:20am
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23rd Apr 2015 10:17pm
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24th Apr 2015 1:35am
Thank you Smiles.....I'm glad you like.....always with encouraging words......honored by the bravo....CPxoJW
Re: All Is Peaceful
27th Apr 2015 11:09pm
I see you still have it in you, my friend. You have su h a way of making love sound so incredibly wonderful. Have missed reading your heartfelt work
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Wow!!! Welcome back sweet soul!! What a wonderful surprise to see you stop by my way again.....I've thought of you many times......thank you so much for your heart touching words......sending luv....hugs and smiles your way.....you very made my day!!!!! Xo :)
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re: Re: All Is Peaceful
28th Apr 2015 9:51pm
Sweet S.....thank you for always leaving a smile upon my page.....always a thrill when you stop my way....humbled by your words....xo :)
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Anonymous
2nd May 2015 2:18pm
Incredible words! This is how I should have been for my ex. This is what I should have done for her...

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re: Re: All Is Peaceful
3rd May 2015 2:44pm
Awe Donovan......what kind words......perhaps it's not too late to capture her heart......have her read it and perhaps she will see.....you have my permission to copy it if you would like......thanks you for sharing words with me......xo :)
Re. All Is Peaceful
18th Dec 2021 2:08am
Lol, I did wonder if this was one you kept in the vaults for 6 years, so I did a bit of digging through your past catalog. It's nice reissuing poems to a new audience from time to time though. I certainly do cos it's nice to get some new reaction/perspective on them & then it all feels fresh again as a result, I think. :-)
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Re: Re. All Is Peaceful
18th Dec 2021 2:58am
Hey Billy……whew……. I was confused for a second Lol! I like to bring oldies back…….sometimes I forget I posted them way back when……I rewrite them sometimes……but rarely……I’m coming up on being here for 10 years…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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18th Dec 2021 3:10am
Yeah, I see you've stuck with it for ten years. I hope you'll celebrate the milestone in some way, maybe with a '10' in the middle of a heart avatar or something, perhaps a special poem even? 😊
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18th Dec 2021 5:13am