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She, the Ultimate Dream
*this, in fact was based on an actual dream* lol
In reality, he has no right
to love her
Yet it's in his dreams
where "THEY" do occur...
Her precious eyes' gaze
frails his sturdy frame
as his soul she claims
Her touch, soothes him within
her tender warmth, it's hold,
aglow does the same...
It's within these dreams
he's so free, to kiss,
to caress, her...
this beautiful lady
Though in life's reality, his...
she's not ever meant to be
Falling softly into mind's
screen, she has been,
n' will forever be his love...
because, SHE...
will always be
his ultimate dream...
In reality, he has no right
to love her
Yet it's in his dreams
where "THEY" do occur...
Her precious eyes' gaze
frails his sturdy frame
as his soul she claims
Her touch, soothes him within
her tender warmth, it's hold,
aglow does the same...
It's within these dreams
he's so free, to kiss,
to caress, her...
this beautiful lady
Though in life's reality, his...
she's not ever meant to be
Falling softly into mind's
screen, she has been,
n' will forever be his love...
because, SHE...
will always be
his ultimate dream...
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Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
17th Apr 2015 1:29am
'tis lovely PM....
oh those dreams we have which will never be a reality...
but what harm is hoping.... :)
oh those dreams we have which will never be a reality...
but what harm is hoping.... :)
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re: Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
17th Apr 2015 1:35am
Yea right? oh well off I'll go back into dreamland! lol
Thanks sweet one, truly appreciate ur time n support :)
Thanks sweet one, truly appreciate ur time n support :)
Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
17th Apr 2015 3:52am
One day babes.... loved this tender feel
it will happen u gotta get out and try...
i am taking my own advice believable me ;)
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
it will happen u gotta get out and try...
i am taking my own advice believable me ;)
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
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re: Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
17th Apr 2015 5:09am
I'm out ALL the time! lol... But yea I can tell u are
my dear! lol... Mucho Gracias Mi Amiga, always! :)
my dear! lol... Mucho Gracias Mi Amiga, always! :)
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21st Apr 2015 7:44am
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KH2fBqZjfqg
loves you Po, always remember!
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxoox
loves you Po, always remember!
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxoox
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21st Apr 2015 2:58pm
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17th Apr 2015 5:12am
Oh hell yea it would be!! lol... Sadly as much as I love to dream, my reality keeps me aware that wide awake
is where I am... Thanks again precious... :)
is where I am... Thanks again precious... :)
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17th Apr 2015 7:12am
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17th Apr 2015 1:15pm
Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
17th Apr 2015 7:34am
Poe this is absolutely lovely! first read of the day & what a wonderful one to wake up to.
much enjoyed
much enjoyed
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re: Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
17th Apr 2015 1:22pm
Well Mami you just make my heart sing
everytime you kiss my ink with your sweetness! lol
Mi Adore Mi Amor! always! ;)
everytime you kiss my ink with your sweetness! lol
Mi Adore Mi Amor! always! ;)
Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
Anonymous
17th Apr 2015 9:51am
Such sweet words so delicately expressed. I too have lucid dreams, you know that when we sleep we slip into a different reality which is just as real as our waking one. This is where we receive encrypted messages from our true (higher) selves. Keep that in mind and let that morning smile last all day :)
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re: Re: She, the Ultimate Dream
17th Apr 2015 1:24pm
Oh yes I'm very much aware of it n yes I try to maintain
THAT dream's 'smile' for as long as I can!
lol... Thank u my dear, truly appreciate your support :)
THAT dream's 'smile' for as long as I can!
lol... Thank u my dear, truly appreciate your support :)
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20th Apr 2015 00:10am
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21st Apr 2015 2:59pm
Thank u, too bad it doesn't help with keeping anyone's interest though...still, appreciate ur thoughts :)
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