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Filling the void
Filling the void
with Love of white
Promises of gold
Pain of silver
and Death of black
I still feel empty inside.
with Love of white
Promises of gold
Pain of silver
and Death of black
I still feel empty inside.
Published 16th Apr 2015
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16th Apr 2015 9:26pm
I like how you use color to convey feeling. It makes the final line so striking. Nice write!
22nd Apr 2015 5:21pm
