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Stalker
You don't have a clue
How I've followed you.
Inhaled your depths
Your giving soul, wizard words
Scratched on paper
For everyone, for me.
This obsession rides on emotion
Fueling, stoking, driving
Erupting sensual lust.
This is you, all of you.
You've spread me
Open, with a swing
Of that pen.
You've fingered
Licked and sucked
Me.
You've shown tenderness
When I'm good.
And schooled me,
Rough like,
When I'm not.
You are hopeful,
But really unaware
Of the heat your mind brings
To a solo soul
Stalking your rooms.
How I've followed you.
Inhaled your depths
Your giving soul, wizard words
Scratched on paper
For everyone, for me.
This obsession rides on emotion
Fueling, stoking, driving
Erupting sensual lust.
This is you, all of you.
You've spread me
Open, with a swing
Of that pen.
You've fingered
Licked and sucked
Me.
You've shown tenderness
When I'm good.
And schooled me,
Rough like,
When I'm not.
You are hopeful,
But really unaware
Of the heat your mind brings
To a solo soul
Stalking your rooms.
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Re: Stalker
15th Apr 2015 7:33am
Re: Stalker
15th Apr 2015 11:21am
Very evocative and not the least bit creepy. I enjoyed reading this. Great write!
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Re: Stalker
15th Apr 2015 11:30am
Well crafted, sensual and mysterious without being graphic. I read this poem and appreciate the aura you've set up in the reader's mind. We get it, I get it ...
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15th Apr 2015 3:40pm
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re: Re: Stalker
15th Apr 2015 3:46pm
Thank you Schiitaryn! Always honored to be on a reading list.
It was inspired by 'My Poets' ;)
It was inspired by 'My Poets' ;)
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15th Apr 2015 4:15pm
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15th Apr 2015 4:37pm
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Anonymous
15th Apr 2015 4:58pm
Feels kind of sensuous and spooky,
eerie prose from my friend lookie.
Your writing is so original, it is very 'captivating'
eerie prose from my friend lookie.
Your writing is so original, it is very 'captivating'
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15th Apr 2015 5:28pm
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Anonymous
15th Apr 2015 6:45pm
The Friend part makes all the difference!
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Re: Stalker
15th Apr 2015 5:00pm
If this is the kind of response you get, for heavens sake, please, please keep stalking. This is infinitely arousing and deeply appealing.
I am out of words. All that is left is to try to control my thoughts and breathing for the rest of the day.
I am out of words. All that is left is to try to control my thoughts and breathing for the rest of the day.
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15th Apr 2015 5:30pm
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15th Apr 2015 5:38pm
I feel for your solo soul, Lookie. If this man did in fact become aware he'd probably drop to his knees. I know I would.
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15th Apr 2015 6:02pm
Re: Stalker
16th Apr 2015 9:34pm
I really like this. It is as if you are actually speaking to the reader --or at least to this reader. Thank you for drawing us (well, me) in to your work like this.
Jay
Jay
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16th Apr 2015 11:14pm
You are all my inspiration. And you need to know it. I feel lucky to get to read the works I do. Sometimes I wish I could give better critique..but what the hell. I just soak it in.
Re: Stalker
16th Apr 2015 9:56pm
I think they may have a clue now looloo, looks like the cat is out of the bag!
I'm sure after this, there will be a few bedroom window's left open at night... or at least the blinds left up ;)
I'm sure after this, there will be a few bedroom window's left open at night... or at least the blinds left up ;)
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16th Apr 2015 11:17pm
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