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Bye bye
Bye bye
Bye bye mommy
Bye bye daddy
Bye bye sissy
Bye bye brothers
Bye bye babies
Bye bye besties
Bye bye lovers
Bye bye poets
Bye bye world
Bye bye broken
Bye bye perfects
Bye bye dolls
Bye bye toys
Bye bye home
Bye bye world
Bye bye mommy
Bye bye daddy
Bye bye sissy
Bye bye brothers
Bye bye babies
Bye bye besties
Bye bye lovers
Bye bye poets
Bye bye world
Bye bye broken
Bye bye perfects
Bye bye dolls
Bye bye toys
Bye bye home
Bye bye world
Published 8th Apr 2015
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8th Apr 2015 11:58pm
After writing this the word "bye" didn't look right 😄
I would really appreciate some advise or suggestions for poems so please comment telling me what u think 😋
I would really appreciate some advise or suggestions for poems so please comment telling me what u think 😋
9th Apr 2015 11:37am
I guess goodbye could always work? Would also work better if you put an explanations.
Like goodbye mom
for taking my teddy or whatever, lol.
Poetry is about going with the flow of your emotions. This speaks more than what you might think ^^
Like goodbye mom
for taking my teddy or whatever, lol.
Poetry is about going with the flow of your emotions. This speaks more than what you might think ^^
9th Apr 2015 9:21pm
