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wishing well
what would happen,
if your world
stopped spinning
'round?
who would catch
you,
if you should
falter,
to the ground.
i'll be your
angel.
i'll be your
heaven,
i'll be your
hell.
if you want
to ride my
wings,
i'll be
kneeling,
at the
wishing well.
what would happen,
if you stopped
coming round?
my world would
stop spinning,
the walls would
come crashing
down.
be my angel.
be my heaven.
be my hell.
i want
to ride your
wings,
so i'll be
waiting,
over by the
wishing well.
if your world
stopped spinning
'round?
who would catch
you,
if you should
falter,
to the ground.
i'll be your
angel.
i'll be your
heaven,
i'll be your
hell.
if you want
to ride my
wings,
i'll be
kneeling,
at the
wishing well.
what would happen,
if you stopped
coming round?
my world would
stop spinning,
the walls would
come crashing
down.
be my angel.
be my heaven.
be my hell.
i want
to ride your
wings,
so i'll be
waiting,
over by the
wishing well.
Published 3rd Apr 2015
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3rd Apr 2015 9:50am
I really liked how the needs or desires to please changed to how the one desired could please.
Well done.
Well done.
4th Apr 2015 7:40am
thank you for reading and commenting, i'm glad you liked it. i'll be looking for some of your work as well.
4th Apr 2015 8:38pm
5th Apr 2015 9:22am
that's very true my friend. this was written from a secret admirers point of view that's how the wishing well comes in to play. thanks for reading, and commenting.
