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I've had enough, he told her...
they'd been shoplifting together
for years, but it had long since
ceased to be fun...
she asked him
what was wrong -
he said I just can't
take anymore...
for years, but it had long since
ceased to be fun...
she asked him
what was wrong -
he said I just can't
take anymore...
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Re: I've had enough, he told her...
2nd Apr 2015 2:36am
This made me laugh. So thankyou. Always love the double edged sword of your words :)
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re: Re: I've had enough, he told her...
2nd Apr 2015 11:45am
Re: I've had enough, he told her...
2nd Apr 2015 8:23am
I was trying to get a jump on this one before reading it and thought it'd be a man lamenting his wife's cooking, but once again your wit rules ... Bravo!
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re: Re: I've had enough, he told her...
2nd Apr 2015 11:47am
Re: I've had enough, he told her...
2nd Apr 2015 9:40pm
re: Re: I've had enough, he told her...
2nd Apr 2015 11:23pm
I'm glad it made you
smile, hib, that makes
my silly little poems
worthwhile, after all..:)
thank you...
smile, hib, that makes
my silly little poems
worthwhile, after all..:)
thank you...
Re: I've had enough, he told her...
3rd Apr 2015 4:02am
I hate it when they reform ( & no jokes abt him having been broken!)...
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3rd Apr 2015 11:04am
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