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Discipline me...
Hold me
Squeeze me
Embrace me
Love me
Want me
Kiss me
Lick me
Bite me
Tease me
Leave me
Scold me
Whip me
Please me
Teach me
Discipline me
Control me
When submitting is an option
The darker the choices
Do all these things to me
To silence the voices
Let's annoy them next door
Put on a show
Play with out favourite toys
Let the good times roll
Fuck me
Beat me
Bruise me
Use me
Make it slow
Make it hurt
Make me scream
Treat me like dirt
Squeeze me
Embrace me
Love me
Want me
Kiss me
Lick me
Bite me
Tease me
Leave me
Scold me
Whip me
Please me
Teach me
Discipline me
Control me
When submitting is an option
The darker the choices
Do all these things to me
To silence the voices
Let's annoy them next door
Put on a show
Play with out favourite toys
Let the good times roll
Fuck me
Beat me
Bruise me
Use me
Make it slow
Make it hurt
Make me scream
Treat me like dirt
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Anonymous
28th Mar 2015 2:13am
"Make it slow "
Now your talking my language.
Otherwise very hot!
Now your talking my language.
Otherwise very hot!
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28th Mar 2015 7:55am
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28th Mar 2015 6:09am
again good write, interesting line scheme.
the sado masichist thing passed me by and it makes me feel uneasy - but then thats my problem (lol)
:-)
the sado masichist thing passed me by and it makes me feel uneasy - but then thats my problem (lol)
:-)
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re: Re: Discipline me...
28th Mar 2015 7:54am
Oops he he tbh its just a topic I find fun writing about XD
Thanks for your comments
Thanks for your comments
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29th Mar 2015 1:02pm
Hmm... Sounds like a party.
For real, though. A fine piece of erotica. Steamy
For real, though. A fine piece of erotica. Steamy
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2016 6:29am
Sounds good. It's like, let's break the rules of convention for once - why not? These are the moments we realise we're living.
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