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do a line [along my spine]
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My greed is slightly disturbing -
I can't hide it 'neath azure anthems,
or below the moon's quiet arousal.
Drink my poetic mead, his tenor voice concedes.
Bleed from the arch of your mind to see.
Currents of weakness tease the night,
reaping in waves on pain's delight.
I recede to his trailing tongue as it burns
along the crease of my affixed sensations.
© 2015 blue angel
My greed is slightly disturbing -
I can't hide it 'neath azure anthems,
or below the moon's quiet arousal.
Drink my poetic mead, his tenor voice concedes.
Bleed from the arch of your mind to see.
Currents of weakness tease the night,
reaping in waves on pain's delight.
I recede to his trailing tongue as it burns
along the crease of my affixed sensations.
© 2015 blue angel
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Re: do a line [along my spine]
20th Mar 2015 10:29pm
Your perceptions seem heightened! "The moon's quiet arousal" is among multiple radiant turns of phrase. Fine job Blue Angel!
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Re: do a line [along my spine]
21st Mar 2015 2:11am
that is some intense, demanding lovemaking, Angel. shocking & sensational!
my body, in its own shame, yearns, & my tongue still burns...
my body, in its own shame, yearns, & my tongue still burns...
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Re: do a line [along my spine]
21st Mar 2015 10:21pm
Re: do a line [along my spine]
23rd Mar 2015 9:53am
Every line is worthy of doing in this wonderful piece blue angel. Beautiful erotica, classy and very sensual.
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Re: do a line [along my spine]
Anonymous
30th Mar 2015 10:00pm
Brilliant, Angel.. nice write..
Dave
Dave
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Re. do a line [along my spine]
16th Aug 2015 1:45pm
If only...I'm longing and lonely for such inspiration...reminded of my placid station. come undone this poet has won a living eye through yours....Thank You Uma.
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Re. do a line [along my spine]
12th May 2016 7:03am
The electromagnetism that flows between energetic bodies, you, him and the moon, is palpable. Excellent.
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Re: Re. do a line [along my spine]
13th May 2016 5:34pm
I'm afraid my riposte is lacking to your sterling commentary, thank you, kindly for reading!
Re. do a line [along my spine]
30th May 2016 10:03am
Great choice of words wonderful spun from the title to the final line.
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Re: Re. do a line [along my spine]
30th May 2016 7:12pm
Thank you, immensely for reading, following and commenting!! ;)~ blue angel