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Submit
The desire lives in me
To submit,
Fully.
Everything, yours.
Nothing is done,
Without your
Permission.
All I do,
Would be for
You.
Then there's this thing...
My pesky will,
Taking over the
Room.
It's too strong,
My need to dominate
You.
It would be done,
In time, with a good
Fucking.
From behind.
To submit,
Fully.
Everything, yours.
Nothing is done,
Without your
Permission.
All I do,
Would be for
You.
Then there's this thing...
My pesky will,
Taking over the
Room.
It's too strong,
My need to dominate
You.
It would be done,
In time, with a good
Fucking.
From behind.
Published 17th Mar 2015
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17th Mar 2015 3:23am
17th Mar 2015 3:25am
17th Mar 2015 3:27am
17th Mar 2015 3:29am
From the other side of the continent in a different country?
It could work.
It could work.
Anonymous
17th Mar 2015 3:24am
i'm sure you could be trained. ;)
17th Mar 2015 3:27am
I wonder sometimes. I'm just so stubborn. Not a great trait for a sub. Would have to be a pretty spectacular teacher ;)
17th Mar 2015 4:02am
part sub, part Dom, that's a rare hybrid. I'll be sure to keep you in front of me...
17th Mar 2015 5:00am
17th Mar 2015 7:06am
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17th Mar 2015 8:54am
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17th Mar 2015 9:38am
It is difficult to control the feeling of submission when you realize it's the sub who has the power in the relationship. I am a strong willed sub, too, and I don't bow easily. Once I do. however, it is like something lets go inside me and I am free. Nice poem. It made me smile!
17th Mar 2015 2:28pm
Anonymous
17th Mar 2015 2:36pm
It made me smile as well in a "devilish" way.
17th Mar 2015 2:41pm
17th Mar 2015 4:33pm
Got to keep those tables turning. Allowing the dominant position to be monopolized is a bore!
17th Mar 2015 5:03pm
