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Moth/Flame
Your
nakedness
enticed
summoned
me.
You
wiggled
wriggled
in front
of me.
You
undulated
past me
into the bedroom.
I was a moth
to your flame.
Followed you.
On the bed
legs open wide
displaying
your
hungry
arousal.
Quickly
undressed.
Slid
myself
eagerly
easily
slowly
fully
into
your
waiting
wet
warmth.
Your
long
guttural
moan.
Repeated
in
rhythm
to
my
motions.
You
gasped.
Your
body
shuddered.
Your
softness
tightened
clenched
around me.
Your
convulsions
caused
my own.
Your
body’s
clasp
released
me.
You
rolled
to
your side.
Cuddled
me
close.
We
dozed
rapture
quenched.
Peaceful
in our love.
nakedness
enticed
summoned
me.
You
wiggled
wriggled
in front
of me.
You
undulated
past me
into the bedroom.
I was a moth
to your flame.
Followed you.
On the bed
legs open wide
displaying
your
hungry
arousal.
Quickly
undressed.
Slid
myself
eagerly
easily
slowly
fully
into
your
waiting
wet
warmth.
Your
long
guttural
moan.
Repeated
in
rhythm
to
my
motions.
You
gasped.
Your
body
shuddered.
Your
softness
tightened
clenched
around me.
Your
convulsions
caused
my own.
Your
body’s
clasp
released
me.
You
rolled
to
your side.
Cuddled
me
close.
We
dozed
rapture
quenched.
Peaceful
in our love.
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Re: Moth/Flame
16th Mar 2015 9:44pm
re: Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 8:52pm
I suspect it is a dream we all have. I am happy to share it.
And, thanks for the "wow"!
Jay
And, thanks for the "wow"!
Jay
Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 00:34am
re: Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 8:53pm
Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 3:03am
re: Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 8:54pm
I tried to show that the lust works and runs in both directions.
Thank you for reading my work.
Jay
Thank you for reading my work.
Jay
Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 7:31am
re: Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 8:55pm
I am glad you liked what I wrote.
Images in words are the "stock-in-trade" of those who would like to thought of as poets. I'm happy you found beauty in my words.
Jay
Images in words are the "stock-in-trade" of those who would like to thought of as poets. I'm happy you found beauty in my words.
Jay
Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 9:43am
Lovely imagery here. I could picture it all in my head. The only thing that confused me was when you used 'shuttered' instead of 'shuddered. Was that deliberate? We have to be careful with spelling since that can throw off the rhythm of the images. But I loved reading it and happily give you an A
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re: Re: Moth/Flame
17th Mar 2015 8:51pm
Opps.
My error.
Thank you for catching it. I have corrected it.
Also (more importantly) thank you for reading and commenting.
I am happy you liked my work.
Jay
My error.
Thank you for catching it. I have corrected it.
Also (more importantly) thank you for reading and commenting.
I am happy you liked my work.
Jay
Re: Moth/Flame
26th Mar 2015 4:30am
Beautiful love making, more than just pure lust. Really love that combo of emotion and passion. Great write.
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re: Re: Moth/Flame
27th Mar 2015 4:00pm
Thank you. I appreciate you stopping by, reading and then taking the time to comment.
Jay
Jay