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Game Of Moans
Consensual teeth marks tattooing
skin - not quite piercings, but
brief reminders of our
favorite spots where the
skin tastes so much sweeter.
Oh, and I'm gonna push all
of your buttons. Or pinch or
tongue or
push between my lips, whichever
makes for a
better rain dance.
If you've ever wondered what a
craving tastes like, kiss me just
before I've had my
way with you, and satiety just
after.
Let's go from whispers to
screams in a matter of
seconds, from deep breathing to
spry heartbeats. The first to
moan finishes last, and to that, I'll
humbly kneel.
Published 13th Mar 2015
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13th Mar 2015 11:14am
Lovely. And I like the play on words you used in your title (huge Game of Thrones fan here). I love that you used more of a free verse than trying to force a rhyme. Good job!
13th Mar 2015 1:28pm
16th Mar 2015 11:52pm
23rd Mar 2015 11:24am
Wow, again. Deliciously erotic yet with an elegant subtlety. Not just a heady physical seduction but an intellectual one as well, which is even more intoxicating. Adore the last line. Mr. Addams has the power to invoke many feelings on many different subjects. Bravo...
