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The heat of her touch
I liked very much.
The sound of her voice
made my heart rejoice
and retract.
I froze
and couldn't act.
Taken aback
by something she had said
before walking off.
Then I awaken
alone on the raft
that is my bed - landlocked.
(My arm still burning...)
I liked very much.
The sound of her voice
made my heart rejoice
and retract.
I froze
and couldn't act.
Taken aback
by something she had said
before walking off.
Then I awaken
alone on the raft
that is my bed - landlocked.
(My arm still burning...)
Published 11th Mar 2015
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11th Mar 2015 11:41pm
Lovely.I loved the words used b y you.It increased the strength of the poetry.
mcjay
mcjay
21st Mar 2015 3:43am
