Pain Metaphor

Really awesome work here, Crow!

Thanks Speedy.  Always good to strike awe!

That's not really what I intended.  I meant to crystalize pain into a demonic small symbol, kind of an anti-Tinkerbell.  A potentially fatal fairy that can be swatted like a fly.  All one can do is try.  I really like your interpretation though, Schiitaryn.  Kind of gives me a charge!

It works beautifully, Schiitaryn!

Beautiful!!

Thank you, Deathnote!

Not sure about this one, but I will say,
pain is a bitch in all forms, all of it!

Keep Writing Crow!!!
Love Always
Zazzles xoxoxo

But it's a bitch that can be subdued, given the right tactics.  Thanks, Jackie.

Thanks, Gabriel.  Sometimes it's the singer, not the song.

This is awesome, lovely work crow!!

Thanks, PoisonApple.  Glad you enjoyed it!

i love the ending. way to put that shit in its place!

Agreed.  Don't give the bastard any more power than it already has!

exactly.

a liberating write, crowfly. adore your imagery

Thanks, Katja.  Sometimes I shave with those razor wings.

Love it.

Thanks, Coralluna.

An interesting take on those nasty neurons waking up and clawing at your conscious.

this is a great description Crowfly, but more so I really enjoy your 'taking control' at the end by converting it into something else equally vocal.

Thanks Frank.  I just wish it always worked.

Its razor wings flutter
Then beating, becoming a blur

Clever.Excessive clever,You play with words with golden gloves in your hands.

mcjay

Refrain, let go... releasing your grip is strength.

I reread this and i guess my head was in my ass not to get this the first time,  :P
Amen to that !!   I so get this Crow, let it go already!!!
Write on my Friend always enjoy your thoughts!
Loves you
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Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox