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Confessions of 12 hours
I cried myself to sleep last night
The reason unknown
The feeling evident
The cause in sight
Did my silent sobs wake you?
Did my tsunami of tears drown you?
Did my shaking shoulders scare you?
Did my cold heart freeze you?
Did my shattered world stab you?
Did my busy brain confuse you?
The answer – no.
I didn’t tell you
You don’t know
I have many methods to stop the show
Its time for the curtain call,
Time for my solitary bow,
I’ve been strong up until this point
But this ends now.
For I’ll not cry any more
You’re input is done
So yes, you attacked us,
But look who won.
The reason unknown
The feeling evident
The cause in sight
Did my silent sobs wake you?
Did my tsunami of tears drown you?
Did my shaking shoulders scare you?
Did my cold heart freeze you?
Did my shattered world stab you?
Did my busy brain confuse you?
The answer – no.
I didn’t tell you
You don’t know
I have many methods to stop the show
Its time for the curtain call,
Time for my solitary bow,
I’ve been strong up until this point
But this ends now.
For I’ll not cry any more
You’re input is done
So yes, you attacked us,
But look who won.
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Re: Confessions of 12 hours
8th Mar 2015 5:53pm
Great ink! I love the second and third stanza, but the ending was the best!! Keep up the good work!
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re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
8th Mar 2015 6:28pm
That's very kind of you, I have never been one for liking my own work, but the meaning of this one is one of my favourites.
Thanks for taking the time to comment :D
Deathnotewhovian
Thanks for taking the time to comment :D
Deathnotewhovian
re: re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
8th Mar 2015 8:16pm
You're welcome, don't worry about your work it's incredible!! I can't wait to read more poems by you!!
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re: re: re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
8th Mar 2015 8:20pm
I'm so happy to hear it.
Like wise, from what I can remember your work was the first stuff I read on this website (or at least one of the first).
Cant wait ti read more of yours aswell :D
Like wise, from what I can remember your work was the first stuff I read on this website (or at least one of the first).
Cant wait ti read more of yours aswell :D
re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
8th Mar 2015 8:21pm
Re: Confessions of 12 hours
Anonymous
8th Mar 2015 11:45pm
Nice ink.. really a wonderful write.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
8th Mar 2015 11:54pm
Re: Confessions of 12 hours
Anonymous
9th Mar 2015 2:23am
You have style!
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re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
9th Mar 2015 7:41am
Re: Confessions of 12 hours
Anonymous
11th Mar 2015 7:27pm
Love the rhetorical questions in the second stanza :)
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re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
11th Mar 2015 7:41pm
Thanks.. Thanks actually my least favourite stanza haha so alteast someone likes it :D
Re: Confessions of 12 hours
2nd Apr 2015 7:26pm
Woven nicely into a picture of struggle and pain, fighting to keep going on but sometimes the challenges overtake some. Great poem look forward to reading more of your work
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re: Re: Confessions of 12 hours
2nd Apr 2015 8:29pm
Excellent Im thrilled you understood it so well and were kind enough to leave this comment... I am also grateful that your interested into my other work
Be well
DNW
Be well
DNW