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Love the loving love
being with you
touching you
looking into your eyes
astride you
the slow rock
of togetherness
reaching within
for the amalgamation of us
we coalesce somewhere
in Eden
brighter winter
colourful autumn
and when we snuggle
we know our souls
are one, our hearts
are entwined
I love you.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
touching you
looking into your eyes
astride you
the slow rock
of togetherness
reaching within
for the amalgamation of us
we coalesce somewhere
in Eden
brighter winter
colourful autumn
and when we snuggle
we know our souls
are one, our hearts
are entwined
I love you.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
Published 5th Mar 2015
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5th Mar 2015 6:19am
ah! what a wonderful way to say i love you.
the physical and the emotional in sync with each other. nice piece of writing
the physical and the emotional in sync with each other. nice piece of writing
5th Mar 2015 6:57am
5th Mar 2015 4:01pm
A true view of romance here, Grace. The bonding of hearts and souls is the key, all the rest is confirmation, as erotic and pleasurable as it might be.
6th Mar 2015 4:10am
Yes the bonding is the most important factor of a relationship.:) Thanks for reading Crowfly.
5th Mar 2015 4:08pm
6th Mar 2015 4:09am
5th Mar 2015 9:18pm
What a way to profess your love...beautifully written,goodluck with the comp.
6th Mar 2015 4:22am
6th Mar 2015 12:18pm
....thinking of the words of Usher , "Nobody kiss it like you" Grace A beautiful, picturesque representation of love. : )
7th Mar 2015 00:23am
