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her
she died
you did not know
her
it did not rain
it was sunny
birds sang
you did not know
her
next time
when she dies
because you know
her
i will cry
you did not know
her
it did not rain
it was sunny
birds sang
you did not know
her
next time
when she dies
because you know
her
i will cry
Published 1st Mar 2015
| Edited 10th Mar 2021
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1st Mar 2015 4:33am
cryptic & provocative.the words in the 2nd stanza seem to have floated & landed in an intricate sequence, despite its apparent simplicity. fine work...
Anonymous
1st Mar 2015 9:45am
Icicles in your words,chilling....
2nd Mar 2015 3:17am
