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Natural Awe
Azurian water trickles from a fall
flooding down across mossy rocks;
The trees grow proudly toward the sky
adorned in leafy locks.
The song birds warble in the wind,
calling out for love;
While insects creep through the undergrowth,
admiring shroom caps up above.
Wildflowers shoot like sprays of stars
from unkempt, chaotic grass;
I continue trudging in awe and wonder
Along this little known forest path.
flooding down across mossy rocks;
The trees grow proudly toward the sky
adorned in leafy locks.
The song birds warble in the wind,
calling out for love;
While insects creep through the undergrowth,
admiring shroom caps up above.
Wildflowers shoot like sprays of stars
from unkempt, chaotic grass;
I continue trudging in awe and wonder
Along this little known forest path.
Published 23rd Feb 2015
| Edited 24th Feb 2015
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23rd Feb 2015 11:54pm
Gorgeous nature verse. I loved your attention to detail. You showed me your stroll through the forest with a true poet's eye. That line about insects admiring the shroom caps up above was one of the most original nature poem lines I've come across. It shows me the forest from an insect's perspective. Kudos to you milady poet. :)
John
John
Anonymous
24th Feb 2015 6:13pm
Brilliant write.. really great work..
Dave
Dave
