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It's your day tomorrow
and I have nothing.
well, there's nothing left to be written.
you are, were and always will be.
my ampersand.
to my Dearest 22/2
and I have nothing.
well, there's nothing left to be written.
you are, were and always will be.
my ampersand.
to my Dearest 22/2
Published 22nd Feb 2015
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22nd Feb 2015 11:04pm
23rd Feb 2015 6:14pm
23rd Feb 2015 00:21am
it's a bridge between one thing & another. joy & sorrow, understanding & confusion, love &...
23rd Feb 2015 6:14pm
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23rd Feb 2015 00:45am
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23rd Feb 2015 6:15pm
24th Feb 2015 1:33pm
the temporal stance started with here just seems a minimalistic part of the holistic 'theme' dealt with I feel. That becomes obvious when the 'nothing' gets stressed twice..in L2 n L3. The incompleteness as if gets fulfilled, I sense by this ampersand. I tend to equate this romantic: a pleasant trouble brewing. Juz me here:)
As always, ur short verses are open to many dimensions Ophie, keep shining more. xx
As always, ur short verses are open to many dimensions Ophie, keep shining more. xx
25th Feb 2015 3:06am
26th Feb 2015 8:08pm
Oh, my dear friend. Lovely and so glad to see you at home with the keys.
16th Jun 2015 8:30pm
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