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This is the sweet I want to try
pointing at the lips
he leaned closer and kissed them.
pointing at the lips
he leaned closer and kissed them.
Published 28th Feb 2015
| Edited 1st Mar 2015
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Anonymous
28th Feb 2015 10:45pm
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7th Mar 2015 2:37pm
16th Mar 2015 10:08pm
deep n delighful piece of write this one. had read this time n again Ophie...esp. with the title that translates to me as ,"saltiness", ryt? I know, you always pack in a lot of starkness in way of contrast or parallel or a metaphorical flow between the title & the body..the body speaks to me in such dripping sensual romance, that is intensified by title..as if u stress, its the needy lifeline salt more than the lucrative sweetnesss.
apart from the content, the way u construct the emphasis on "this" n the punctuation-less dialogues n brevity in there..breathtaking as usual, dear!
hope u r doing gud nowadays n waiting to see ur writes..<3xx
apart from the content, the way u construct the emphasis on "this" n the punctuation-less dialogues n brevity in there..breathtaking as usual, dear!
hope u r doing gud nowadays n waiting to see ur writes..<3xx
Sapore di sale!
You Gave me blue, you gave me summer, you gave me memory with this one.
Thanks
just an old Italian song I had forgotten:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R76Abv8-Mbc
You Gave me blue, you gave me summer, you gave me memory with this one.
Thanks
just an old Italian song I had forgotten:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R76Abv8-Mbc
21st May 2015 2:55am
16th Jun 2015 8:27pm
10th Jul 2015 7:04pm
your love rises
beyond the mountains
and beyond
the beyond
of all those who know nothing
about love
your sensuality
is hidden in words
so deep
who would not love
in your love
love to sweep
and deep
do comment on this please
beyond the mountains
and beyond
the beyond
of all those who know nothing
about love
your sensuality
is hidden in words
so deep
who would not love
in your love
love to sweep
and deep
do comment on this please
11th Jul 2015 11:04pm
'''just a poetic love thought!'''
inspired by a poet of ur STANDING
I salute you for ur understanding
inspired by a poet of ur STANDING
I salute you for ur understanding
