How does that make you feel

I wrote this and the more I read it the more I hate it

no i think you are very wrong about this
for ths reason for sure and others too
why in the fuck would you care about what others
think unless you have a strong reason
as far as your story goes its others that counts
then again we release burdens when we write

You've expressed a feeling many poets go through ... That moment when we don't care what others think or do let alone say.  In those moments the cocoon feels just fine - so why don't people just leave it the hell alone.

Cool ink.

Thanks😉