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Spontaneous Combustion
In your suggestive splendour
Of form hugging fabric
A voluptuous spell is woven
With kissable lips
You spin business into pleasure
Making your minutes my agenda
Distanced by indecency
Separated by commitment
Our action is cautioned
For in unspoken words
Seethes slippery hot desire
Caged by in-opportunity
With white knuckled restraint
Leashes are held
But the bindings begin to fray
Fearful of that moment
Of raw heated honesty
Drowned in mutual appreciation
Disrobe your hesitation
Yield your saturate surrender
Unleash my surging worship
Before the bars prove futile
And the air ignites
To burn in vulgar conflagration
We really need to fuck
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Published 14th Feb 2015
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14th Feb 2015 1:19am
With kissable lips
You spin business into pleasure
Making your minutes my agenda <----
Are u kidding me with this line!!
GAWD DAMN it is so powerful!!!
WOW! I would love to talk with you one day,
I am sure you would Blow my fucking mind Franko!!!
This is absolutely perfect!!
Happy Valentines my Friend~
Write ON!
Zazzles
14th Feb 2015 9:21pm
Thank-you Zazzles,
I'm not sure about blowing minds, but I would no doubt grant you a glimpse of my passion. You gift me with high praise Zazzles, wanting to exchange words is quite an invitation of acceptance - which is again, quite a compliment in this age of detached human condition.
Happy Valentines to you as well!
I'm not sure about blowing minds, but I would no doubt grant you a glimpse of my passion. You gift me with high praise Zazzles, wanting to exchange words is quite an invitation of acceptance - which is again, quite a compliment in this age of detached human condition.
Happy Valentines to you as well!
15th Feb 2015 00:20am
Anonymous
14th Feb 2015 3:03am
white knuckle restraint
is only strong as the grip
are your hands able?
nice last line. to the point.
is only strong as the grip
are your hands able?
nice last line. to the point.
14th Feb 2015 9:27pm
The point starts at the
space between my thighs where it
limits common sense
But common sense is pretty damn over-rated most of the time!
space between my thighs where it
limits common sense
But common sense is pretty damn over-rated most of the time!
14th Feb 2015 7:45pm
Wow! All that visionary erotic longing and then the perfect punch line. "Yield your saturate surrender / Unleash my surging worship." This is powerful eroticism, and this might well have burst into flame without your sense of humor. Fine job as always, Frank.
14th Feb 2015 9:50pm
Thank you Crowfly - some days I can almost feel the air thicken - these are the days when my glances and looks convey indecent intentions, perfume seems to linger in my nose and my mouth stays dry regardless of how much water I drink.
Heady stuff indeed!
Heady stuff indeed!
16th Feb 2015 4:21am
16th Feb 2015 7:26am
Thank you looloolookie - I had quite a bit of passion fueled heat on board when I wrote that piece.
Very glad you enjoyed it.
Very glad you enjoyed it.
