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Never Touched
I’m trapped here
In your elegant embrace
Your hand upon my throat
In my chest
Surrender
Simple
Can’t fightYou’ve won
Now take your prize
Its right there
The tempo is slowing
Softly
Can you feel it
Even though we’ve
Never touched
In your elegant embrace
Your hand upon my throat
In my chest
Surrender
Simple
Can’t fightYou’ve won
Now take your prize
Its right there
The tempo is slowing
Softly
Can you feel it
Even though we’ve
Never touched
Published 9th May 2011
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9th May 2011 8:20am
easy, and the simplicity of structure is perfect for the content. Not to say that's a necessity, just nice to see. Beautiful.
11th May 2011 9:28am
9th May 2011 12:47pm
11th May 2011 9:27am
Moving is definitely a good thing. I feel if a poem moves me then it has served its purpose. Thank you for commenting.
9th May 2011 7:38pm
11th May 2011 9:26am
Yes indeed it is a very beautiful one. Glad to know you picked that up! Thank you.
15th Apr 2013 4:30pm
15th Feb 2015 10:43am
Unfulfilled yearning ...
... Always the worst but makes for vivid fantasies and ink such as this.
... Always the worst but makes for vivid fantasies and ink such as this.
