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Thanks for the Memories
the boys in town would always chase her
come to accept that she would never be mine
but the stars aligned, her mood just right
took that chance to ask her to dance
the summer air blew against our skin
as I held out my hand she grabbed hold
we were young with the world ahead of us
if I only knew then what I do now
I would of savored the moment
I had many problems that weakened me
she had problems that made her cry
we were each other rock
though the hard and worse of times
that’s how I knew it was love
I needed her more than words could ever say
when there were no words we just laid
her head on my chest as the day passed
waking up to her beautiful face
the hands of time took its toll
she got sick, I got horribly depressed
taking my anger out on her to release my frustration
felt like I was becoming part of her problems
with tears down her face, she says…
"I can’t keep playing these games
you will always be my heart, but I have to go
thanks for the memories"
come to accept that she would never be mine
but the stars aligned, her mood just right
took that chance to ask her to dance
the summer air blew against our skin
as I held out my hand she grabbed hold
we were young with the world ahead of us
if I only knew then what I do now
I would of savored the moment
I had many problems that weakened me
she had problems that made her cry
we were each other rock
though the hard and worse of times
that’s how I knew it was love
I needed her more than words could ever say
when there were no words we just laid
her head on my chest as the day passed
waking up to her beautiful face
the hands of time took its toll
she got sick, I got horribly depressed
taking my anger out on her to release my frustration
felt like I was becoming part of her problems
with tears down her face, she says…
"I can’t keep playing these games
you will always be my heart, but I have to go
thanks for the memories"
Published 11th Feb 2015
| Edited 2nd Apr 2019
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11th Feb 2015 10:34pm
I absolutely adore this piece sad yet beautify crazy how much you give and feel and then luke you were nothing at all
11th Feb 2015 10:38pm
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11th Feb 2015 11:06pm
Such a sad and beautiful poem.
I can really relate to this and understand the craziness love can bring. Great poem
I can really relate to this and understand the craziness love can bring. Great poem
11th Feb 2015 11:16pm
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11th Feb 2015 11:19pm
wow, so sad so very sad Devil
The hands of time took its toll
She got sick, I got depressed
Fighting to release my frustration
Felt like I became part of her problems
Keep em coming my friend!!!
Zazzles xoxox
The hands of time took its toll
She got sick, I got depressed
Fighting to release my frustration
Felt like I became part of her problems
Keep em coming my friend!!!
Zazzles xoxox
11th Feb 2015 11:26pm
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11th Feb 2015 11:43pm
Provoking write, D. Breaks my heart, actually. S he was the lucky one, btw.
11th Feb 2015 11:47pm
Anonymous
11th Feb 2015 11:58pm
very nice! and very real! I've been divorced twice! this is really how things work! thanks for sharing!
12th Feb 2015 1:19am
Anonymous
12th Feb 2015 00:26am
Great write, DC.. sad and beautiful, all at the same time.. brilliantly done young blood.. you've shifted into another gear, great job..
Dave
Dave
12th Feb 2015 1:20am
12th Feb 2015 6:52am
12th Feb 2015 10:05am
It is sad but it's a part of life.
It nice to hear such kind words from you. Always has great meaning to me.
Not sure if I have a gift but I do have great friends on here 😁
It nice to hear such kind words from you. Always has great meaning to me.
Not sure if I have a gift but I do have great friends on here 😁
12th Feb 2015 10:49am
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