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My found walk
Have always wondered what
other
paths are there to walk...
do I skip, gallop, or run to them?
Dictations of societal inputs
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas...
To walk on my own?
To find myself?
To seek a centered balance?
Let me walk...
Let me go...
Let me ...
and coming back
to
a mid place
that will
become
home.
posted to Inspiration contest--inspired by Eric Benet "Come home to me"
other
paths are there to walk...
do I skip, gallop, or run to them?
Dictations of societal inputs
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas...
To walk on my own?
To find myself?
To seek a centered balance?
Let me walk...
Let me go...
Let me ...
and coming back
to
a mid place
that will
become
home.
posted to Inspiration contest--inspired by Eric Benet "Come home to me"
Published 11th Feb 2015
| Edited 11th Mar 2015
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12th Feb 2015 3:41am
12th Feb 2015 3:46pm
10th Mar 2015 5:03pm
"Dictations of societal inputs
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas..." great use of words
Might want to check the noun verb agreement---
path is singular, are is plural
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas..." great use of words
Might want to check the noun verb agreement---
path is singular, are is plural
10th Mar 2015 6:25pm
thanks!! Appreciate the critic--will look at changin it--verb agreement...well we tend to disagree lol!! Truly thanks!! :)
10th Mar 2015 6:47pm
what's that old song line, "there's only you and me and we just disagree"...
31st Mar 2015 2:43am
31st Mar 2015 1:41pm
19th Oct 2015 8:15pm
"Dictations of societal inputs
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas...
To walk on my own?" <---Ohhh, I'm so peanutbutter&jelly-ous of this, wish I had thought of it myself! :)
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas...
To walk on my own?" <---Ohhh, I'm so peanutbutter&jelly-ous of this, wish I had thought of it myself! :)
19th Oct 2015 9:21pm
lol..on the pb and j....only a snippet of what you got girl..only a snippet!!! :)
25th Jan 2016 2:55am
Culture is a set of accommodations an individual makes for the benefit of the institution. The paths dictated abound because they paint boundaries for the paradigm. The paradigm is your operating system. Change your perspective enough and you can re-set your schema. But I s'pose you already caught that...
Dictations of societal inputs
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas...
To walk on my own?
To find myself?
To seek a centered balance?
That's where the balance comes from. Walking each one to find your own steps as already hidden within them.
Dictations of societal inputs
create a a taboo of
mental enigmas...
To walk on my own?
To find myself?
To seek a centered balance?
That's where the balance comes from. Walking each one to find your own steps as already hidden within them.
26th Jan 2016 1:26pm
"That's where the balance comes from. Walking each one to find your own steps as already hidden within them" Love this--may have to add to my favorite quote list
