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perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
can be out too long
in an attempt to not let the game
get the best of you
but that candle has wicks on both sides
and in the middle
you always stink of it
like cat piss on clean laundry
doesn't wash off
inside of thumb blackened
and finally the charcoal faded well
even numbers run east and west
the six string can always be sanded down again
still can't throw water
back at the sky alone though
or stay here any longer
while you refuse to cut down your dead
that hang from trees by their only good leg
there are sketches of
in my favorite saloon
was dragged once
out of a perfectly good brothel
for this
a sequence of syntax
that tastes like the inside
of my favorite monster masks
worn only to disguise as another suitor
in an attempt to not let the game
get the best of you
but that candle has wicks on both sides
and in the middle
you always stink of it
like cat piss on clean laundry
doesn't wash off
inside of thumb blackened
and finally the charcoal faded well
even numbers run east and west
the six string can always be sanded down again
still can't throw water
back at the sky alone though
or stay here any longer
while you refuse to cut down your dead
that hang from trees by their only good leg
there are sketches of
in my favorite saloon
was dragged once
out of a perfectly good brothel
for this
a sequence of syntax
that tastes like the inside
of my favorite monster masks
worn only to disguise as another suitor
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Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
10th Feb 2015 10:37pm
re: Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
10th Feb 2015 11:29pm
Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
10th Feb 2015 11:16pm
saloons & brothels always provide adventurous literary journeys for the poet...
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10th Feb 2015 11:30pm
Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
11th Feb 2015 2:41am
I read it 3 times. Once in my head, twice out loud. Thoroughly enjoyed this. So much to play with, roll around in my mouth.
Thanks!
Thanks!
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re: Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
12th Feb 2015 6:18am
Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
11th Feb 2015 2:41am
still can't throw water
back at the sky alone though ...
Loved this line and that entire stanza really
... This one resonates for me john - as if you read my mind.
back at the sky alone though ...
Loved this line and that entire stanza really
... This one resonates for me john - as if you read my mind.
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re: Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
12th Feb 2015 6:20am
i thought that stanza was the most powerful especially peaking in the middle so cool it stuck out like that to you man.....
thanx LSP..........
thanx LSP..........
Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Feb 2015 6:38am
11th Feb 2015 6:37am
Eye ternid catphish ontew yer poeitree und he gawt a boneher jawnknee rott
slikk wryte
Rm
slikk wryte
Rm
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re: Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
12th Feb 2015 6:22am
as uncomfortable as i am arousing anything with whiskers, i am still flattered roach...........
thanx man...........
thanx man...........
Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
11th Feb 2015 7:41am
omg Jon! U and I are cut from the same cloth.
while you refuse to cut down your dead
that hang from trees by their only good leg <<--
too rich!
Zazzles
while you refuse to cut down your dead
that hang from trees by their only good leg <<--
too rich!
Zazzles
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re: Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
12th Feb 2015 6:24am
re: re: Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
12th Feb 2015 2:53pm
Re: perspiration and a mouth full of 9 volts
12th Feb 2015 5:57am
Greeting cards from somewhere beneath the zero. Good blues, brother from another gutter.
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12th Feb 2015 6:27am
keep the odometer at a negative till you sell the ride like it's got low miles.......