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Soul Collector
admiring her from afar
the one who will be my greatest achievement
once done I'd be a guard to Lucifer’s throne
all I have to do is take this witch's soul
slowly I step towards her pretty vessel
feelings of fear start rolling in
not inside her, but inside me
such feelings I thought lost long ago
could this be the fear of the unknown?
I'm hesitant to take such a beauty
lusting for her bewitching body
love at first sight
I take a deep breath
put my hand on her shoulder
she turns rapidly, then I catch her eye
a sudden shock, stunning me to her will
weeks go by, hell becomes impatient
coming up with excuses for why I couldn't yet
I must find away to muster up the courage
what’s another life?
I take her to a dark alley
taking advantage of her trust
kiss her repeatedly to take away her thoughts
raising up the knife as she closes her eyes
that's when I hear the most amazing words
“I love you”
the knife falls from my hand
I drop to my knees
she runs away screaming into the night
the one who will be my greatest achievement
once done I'd be a guard to Lucifer’s throne
all I have to do is take this witch's soul
slowly I step towards her pretty vessel
feelings of fear start rolling in
not inside her, but inside me
such feelings I thought lost long ago
could this be the fear of the unknown?
I'm hesitant to take such a beauty
lusting for her bewitching body
love at first sight
I take a deep breath
put my hand on her shoulder
she turns rapidly, then I catch her eye
a sudden shock, stunning me to her will
weeks go by, hell becomes impatient
coming up with excuses for why I couldn't yet
I must find away to muster up the courage
what’s another life?
I take her to a dark alley
taking advantage of her trust
kiss her repeatedly to take away her thoughts
raising up the knife as she closes her eyes
that's when I hear the most amazing words
“I love you”
the knife falls from my hand
I drop to my knees
she runs away screaming into the night
Published 8th Feb 2015
| Edited 29th Mar 2019
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8th Feb 2015 00:18am
8th Feb 2015 00:19am
Anonymous
8th Feb 2015 00:21am
Brilliant, DC.. this is a great fucking write.. i really loved this.. this is pure magic, love the story line..
Dave
Dave
8th Feb 2015 00:22am
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8th Feb 2015 2:23am
Anonymous
8th Feb 2015 1:32am
Beautifully written and dark ink well done
8th Feb 2015 2:24am
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8th Feb 2015 7:24am
To have love and lose it wow yet Another amazing poem great work i loved it :)
8th Feb 2015 7:35am
8th Feb 2015 2:57pm
Devil I have to say I truly enjoyed the way you clearly said what needed to be said and i especially like the tone and the style in which
u say it... VERY VERY well sctructured, i think though u are missing a s? on feeling? should it read feelings? just a friendly tip :)
Zazzles
u say it... VERY VERY well sctructured, i think though u are missing a s? on feeling? should it read feelings? just a friendly tip :)
Zazzles
8th Feb 2015 7:30pm
8th Feb 2015 10:33pm
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9th Feb 2015 12:58pm
Aww that's beautiful! Pretty dark and gothic I should say :) Great work of ink!
9th Feb 2015 1:07pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2019 9:08pm
Nice twist. I really enjoyed it. Reminds me of something I wrote a while ago.
14th Nov 2019 7:44am
Anonymous
14th Nov 2019 12:50pm
Makes me think of this song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1yIJ706i78
Sorry no subtitles;
The first lines are;
"Sorry, I will have to kill you,
As it is the only way I will know for sure
That there will never be
Anything between us, perhaps."
The last lines are;
"I will have to kill myself,
As it is the only way you will know for sure
That there will never be
Anything between us, perhaps."
Sorry no subtitles;
The first lines are;
"Sorry, I will have to kill you,
As it is the only way I will know for sure
That there will never be
Anything between us, perhaps."
The last lines are;
"I will have to kill myself,
As it is the only way you will know for sure
That there will never be
Anything between us, perhaps."
