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An Internal Storm is Brewing... **(collaboration with "crowfly")
**Storm portion by me (Debitchgirl)
edited to add the work of crowfly
shown in italics and
further to the right
An internal storm is brewing
slowly raging behind my eyes
inside me no smooth sailing
only dark and cloudy skies
She seems outwardly so calm
but her eyes begin to dance
lightning in perfect blue
I can't help but take a chance [/i]
My tempestuous soul screams
my carnal appetite increased
my entire body in turmoil
I need help to tame the beast
She sits with compact power
but her body language will not lie
that need won't be contained
why would she even try?
An internal storm is brewing
growing in its erotic intensity
we can take shelter in each other
that is if you have the propensity
There's an invitation in her smile
Her intent is not concealed
No taking shelter from her storm
So soon to be revealed
With every touch and every taste
passion escalates beyond measure
as bodies tingle from goose bumps
we share a tempest of primal pleasure.
**thank you so much Thomas...
you helped complete this piece and saved it
I enjoyed your contribution immensely
edited to add the work of crowfly
shown in italics and
further to the right
An internal storm is brewing
slowly raging behind my eyes
inside me no smooth sailing
only dark and cloudy skies
She seems outwardly so calm
but her eyes begin to dance
lightning in perfect blue
I can't help but take a chance [/i]
My tempestuous soul screams
my carnal appetite increased
my entire body in turmoil
I need help to tame the beast
She sits with compact power
but her body language will not lie
that need won't be contained
why would she even try?
An internal storm is brewing
growing in its erotic intensity
we can take shelter in each other
that is if you have the propensity
There's an invitation in her smile
Her intent is not concealed
No taking shelter from her storm
So soon to be revealed
With every touch and every taste
passion escalates beyond measure
as bodies tingle from goose bumps
we share a tempest of primal pleasure.
**thank you so much Thomas...
you helped complete this piece and saved it
I enjoyed your contribution immensely
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