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An Internal Storm is Brewing... **(collaboration with "crowfly")

**Storm portion by me (Debitchgirl)      
edited to add the work of crowfly      
shown in italics and      
further to the right      
   

An internal storm is brewing      
slowly raging behind my eyes      
inside me no smooth sailing      
only dark and cloudy skies      
    
      She seems outwardly so calm      
      but her eyes begin to dance      
      lightning in perfect blue      
      I can't help but take a chance
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My tempestuous soul screams      
my carnal appetite increased      
my entire body in turmoil      
I need help to tame the beast      
    
      She sits with compact power      
      but her body language will not lie      
      that need won't be contained      
      why would she even try?    

    
An internal storm is brewing      
growing in its erotic intensity      
we can take shelter in each other      
that is if you have the propensity      
    
      There's an invitation in her smile      
      Her intent is not concealed      
      No taking shelter from her storm      
      So soon to be revealed    

    
With every touch and every taste      
passion escalates beyond measure      
as bodies tingle from goose bumps      
we share a tempest of primal pleasure.   

     
     
**thank you so much Thomas...      
you helped complete this piece and saved it      
I enjoyed your contribution immensely
Written by Deborahlee3313 (poetry in oceans)
Published | Edited 10th Feb 2015
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