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Naughty Whore
I saw you come in today
wanting so badly to talk to you
I started a message
hands shaking, pussy pulsating
legs quivering with desire
then I buckled
what would I say
to a Master poet
who comes on strong
leaving me on my back
heaving from the blows
I take from your heavy handed verse
cunt creamy the result
of a real beating
you fist fuck my pussy
with poetic assault
intellectual devil
leaves me speechless
pissing down my throat
your brawler thoughts
drinking you down
so seductive with your ink
rough and real
I know from your vibe
you get down and dirty
just the way I love it
knowing you'd enjoy
fucking me in my ass
with full force
while you pull my hair
slapping my ass for being
a naughty whore
teasing without giving in
a wild submissive
needing to be mounted and broken
by a Master poet like you
you lay it down hard
leaving me on the ground
mouth full of your poetic cock
gagging on your depth
I'm left breathless
choked by your hard cock
as you shoot another
salt loaded verse down my throat
brain cum soaked, pussy wet
your submissive little whore
wanting so badly to talk to you
I started a message
hands shaking, pussy pulsating
legs quivering with desire
then I buckled
what would I say
to a Master poet
who comes on strong
leaving me on my back
heaving from the blows
I take from your heavy handed verse
cunt creamy the result
of a real beating
you fist fuck my pussy
with poetic assault
intellectual devil
leaves me speechless
pissing down my throat
your brawler thoughts
drinking you down
so seductive with your ink
rough and real
I know from your vibe
you get down and dirty
just the way I love it
knowing you'd enjoy
fucking me in my ass
with full force
while you pull my hair
slapping my ass for being
a naughty whore
teasing without giving in
a wild submissive
needing to be mounted and broken
by a Master poet like you
you lay it down hard
leaving me on the ground
mouth full of your poetic cock
gagging on your depth
I'm left breathless
choked by your hard cock
as you shoot another
salt loaded verse down my throat
brain cum soaked, pussy wet
your submissive little whore
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Re: Naughty Whore
I wish I felt something like this every time I wrote a poem, and got that kind of reception. I'd be writing all day long. Maybe some commentary will suffice for now, my submissive little poet. I'll just have to control myself, Lady Crim.
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28th Jan 2015 9:45pm
unleash on me Sir Crow ;) if you like thank you for leaving your thoughts with love Crim
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I have also felt the impact of the blows caused by the power of Ink, punch after punch, poetry both soothes and disrupts my mind, and no one does it quite like you Crimson... As always your poem has struck my sensitive bones, Write on Gurl!!
love
Zazzles xoxoxox
love
Zazzles xoxoxox
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28th Jan 2015 9:46pm
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2015 8:15pm
Wow girl! Fucking ace job beautiful! Such power in these lustfull lines! 😜
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28th Jan 2015 9:47pm
thank you lovely one for showing love to this lust fueled ink with love Brenda :)
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27th Jan 2015 8:32pm
Goddamn Brenda; what have You been
thinking about today: Oh, Nevermind; I
know.
I decided to take a break at work and
now I'm glad I did; but, Shit, You're going
to make it Uncomfortable for Me to ride
on My forklift now just thinking about
this Dirty Write of Yours. >;-)
Erotic Poem... Pan
thinking about today: Oh, Nevermind; I
know.
I decided to take a break at work and
now I'm glad I did; but, Shit, You're going
to make it Uncomfortable for Me to ride
on My forklift now just thinking about
this Dirty Write of Yours. >;-)
Erotic Poem... Pan
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thank you Sexy Pan for digging this lustful ink of mine.. pleased it affected you in such a way ;) with love Brenda :)
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27th Jan 2015 9:34pm
Double barreled lusty buck-shot blasted in a scatter shot of hot sexy expression.
Just don't lose yourself in all that gushing heat Crim, those borders are sounding permeable - we don't want to lose you to osmosis!
Just don't lose yourself in all that gushing heat Crim, those borders are sounding permeable - we don't want to lose you to osmosis!
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28th Jan 2015 9:50pm
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28th Jan 2015 9:52pm
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27th Jan 2015 10:57pm
Oh my this is sexy and delichus loving your words today
In every way!!!!!
In every way!!!!!
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28th Jan 2015 9:52pm
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28th Jan 2015 1:00am
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28th Jan 2015 9:53pm
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28th Jan 2015 4:36am
I know the power of poetry; it can lead us to some satisfying fantasies...
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28th Jan 2015 9:54pm
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28th Jan 2015 8:33am
While reading this ... my heart began to race , a nervousness came over me ....as my many secrets we're reveled aloud . Thanx for sharing
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re: Re: Naughty Whore
28th Jan 2015 9:55pm
thank you for relating on such a deep level Brandon with love and respect Crim :)
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28th Jan 2015 2:00pm
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28th Jan 2015 9:55pm
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28th Jan 2015 2:11pm
Amazing lines!! Sexy, and brilliant. That is you, Crim. I love it! Sex and poetry = line licking passion! Respectfully, blue angel
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28th Jan 2015 9:56pm
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2015 5:17pm
Sexy Crim.....I would say you got your words just right......mmmm.....sexy perfect!! Xo :)
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28th Jan 2015 9:57pm
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29th Jan 2015 1:40am
enjoyed this write so much - not sure that I should have
excellent words :-)
excellent words :-)
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29th Jan 2015 2:18am
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29th Jan 2015 3:54am
Nah, you aren't naughty, Brenda. ;)
Just a fiery free spirit sharing the heat.
Keep it up, fair lass. Never stop.
You know, :)
Chad
Just a fiery free spirit sharing the heat.
Keep it up, fair lass. Never stop.
You know, :)
Chad
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29th Jan 2015 4:42pm
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30th Jan 2015 5:07am
Aaaawwww ur such a good lil whore, cum to me n suck me more baby, drink of me, incessantly! lol... Yea I'm hot now lol
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30th Jan 2015 3:53pm
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22nd Feb 2015 5:00pm
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2015 10:45pm
You have taken this whore (who by nature is naughty ) and brought her to a whole different level. Oh to be the great deserving poet!!
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22nd Feb 2015 5:01pm
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21st Mar 2015 1:12am