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& There Was Nonelouder
I am the way a forgotten lover breaks
Too blind to bow out grace(fully)
( Please.. sw(allow) me (to be) whole )
Beneath crumbling walls
Carved in this dying p(art) of me
I travel the length of a universe in his eyes
Falling on shattered remnants of my masochistic daydreams
Be still my bleeding heart
Time will cease its motion
As his voice echos through scarring frequencies in my mind
Searing himself into my subconscious
I am an origami spirit
The broken paper doll
(Submissive) in his hands
Copyright 2009 Kandice Bush
Too blind to bow out grace(fully)
( Please.. sw(allow) me (to be) whole )
Beneath crumbling walls
Carved in this dying p(art) of me
I travel the length of a universe in his eyes
Falling on shattered remnants of my masochistic daydreams
Be still my bleeding heart
Time will cease its motion
As his voice echos through scarring frequencies in my mind
Searing himself into my subconscious
I am an origami spirit
The broken paper doll
(Submissive) in his hands
Copyright 2009 Kandice Bush
Published 10th Nov 2009
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2009 11:50am
i love the last stanza,"the origami spirit---- in his hands", brilliant stuff!
15th Nov 2009 10:30am
18th Jul 2011 5:53pm
This poem is far too clever for a mere mortal like me to comment on. :) I shall have to read it a thousand times to earn the right to comment thoroughly (and I'll enjoy every one of them).
Very good!
Very good!
