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I’m a star inside
( Im trying something new for this one tell me how you hate it or like it please)
I am your star shining bright. I am the vanilla twilight look into my eyes you see something new. When I get mad my passion shows through, can’t you see the uniqueness around me? I don’t stay high up am all around you now shining bright with my head held proud. No one gonna determine my fate and no one gonna take my life. I will live how I want and shine high in that vanilla sky.
I am your star shining bright. I am the vanilla twilight look into my eyes you see something new. When I get mad my passion shows through, can’t you see the uniqueness around me? I don’t stay high up am all around you now shining bright with my head held proud. No one gonna determine my fate and no one gonna take my life. I will live how I want and shine high in that vanilla sky.
Published 22nd Jan 2015
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22nd Jan 2015 8:18pm
The imagery is nice in this one. Not so sure about the format (kinda hurt my eyes to read) but overall, an enjoyable read
23rd Jan 2015 3:36am
ty for the comment and the format it same as all my others well it shows on my computer it is. anyways I'm glad you like it.
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I am your star shining bright
I am the vanilla twilight
Look into my eyes you see something new
When I get mad my passion shows through
Can’t you see the Uniqueness around me?
I don’t stay high up am all around you now
Shining bright with my head held proud
No one gonna determine my fate and
No one gonna Take my life
I will live how I want and
Shine High in that vanilla sky
I am the vanilla twilight
Look into my eyes you see something new
When I get mad my passion shows through
Can’t you see the Uniqueness around me?
I don’t stay high up am all around you now
Shining bright with my head held proud
No one gonna determine my fate and
No one gonna Take my life
I will live how I want and
Shine High in that vanilla sky
27th Jan 2015 6:48am
